Shocking News
What a shock I got
When I read my news
A message for me
Brought tears streaming down
I could not control
The tears flowing down
Unable to speak
I let the tears flow
When all my tears stopped
I sat quietly
It felt like hours
Searching for a poem
A poet wrote
I searched several times
Without finding it
I tried the next day
The next day I searched
For the poem written
I struggled to find it
I did not give up
This time I found it
I left a comment
On a special poem
Pleased to succeeded
To add my comment
On a loss of a friend
She will be missed.
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