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Shock Tactics

It is silent Neon sulphuric mustard gas It is the snare Spilling poison, dropped chalice You are the cupbearer Drinking your holy communion From ashes to rubble I remember you The smiling tiger Roaring to the pounce Fiercely tugging at life caught Between your polished claws Until the wall fell and celebration We were selling bricks in bin liners You can get up off your knees now The table would have killed you anyway.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 11:42:00 AM
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! GOING IN MY FAVORITES... of ALL TIME!! The ending is just... incredible. All of your images are exquisite... in fact every aspect of the poem is just perfect. Thanks for all your comments... and for this write! You have an amazing talent!
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:37:00 AM
I loved the ride..I think I get all but the last line. Soup mail me please so I can enjoy it in its entirety. Light & Love
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