Shivers Up the Back

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My husband proudly told me of the shark’s paths. I told him, he did not see the shark that went right behind him. We are not that smart. Doo doo doo doo...can anyone say JAWS!

SHIVERS UP THE BACK Taking a dive at an amusement park, He was taught to notice the arc of sharks. Stay out of their way, And don’t try to play. For a shark’s misdirection’s their earmark. 6/2/2018

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/12/2018 10:25:00 PM

G'day Kim … I reckon the best shark is one battered and served with potato chips. Thank you Kim - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2018 10:27:00 PM

LOL!