Shivering Flocks

Very good haiku here Carolyn!!

Hi there gal friend, haiku are numbered OR the first line is used as the title, strive for 2 parts [1 part is two conceptually and gramtically connected lines..you have this in your lines 1 & 2 though I would chose cold OR harsh] now the single line must be something else which relates to the topic and is connected to the concept somehow but not the same topic..to me you have no cut here no juxtaposed image or other sense..think of a different line 3 other than the birds..

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Nancy's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Holy moly, this is a crack-up!!! totally dig it, Carolyn and preesh your presence and support. Namaste~N

Don't care to try them the hemo's are bad enought. Nice poem of sucks. Smile. Agape, Moses

oh, those damn dreaded polyps. Don't you just hate them? Great title for this one too, Carolyn!!! way to do your entry!!

Been there but.....Doc said I am clear do not need another one for 10 years. Wishing you the best in the sucky contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Hmmm A little scarey but told with good humor. Nice job my friend. Hope you're doing better. God Bless, JB

Toooo funny..and so true..had one of those suckers and it wasnt fun...thanks for all your comments..means alot to me. BG /LNC

Yep! I had the procedure - polyps. I tell ya this plugged-up condition gives me a pain in the yes. LOve, daver

Funny and scary at the same time, my friend. My mum had an enema before she had me and said the other people in the hospital ward thought it was hilarious - until they had it too. Raquel used to love Enya and got sooo mad when I called her Enema : )