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Shiver Forest

inside the fireplace
                                  
                                         tinkle  branches crepitate
   
                             the forest’s footstep


Written: April 17, 2021

ONE HAIKU Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 6:00 PM
lovely lines, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 22, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Thanks for reading and for your congratulations Jan, best regards
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Hi Lasaad, Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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April 22, 2021 at 6:24 PM
Thank you so much Alexis, that’s so sweet of you, have a great evening, regards //Las
Roper Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Lasaad, great imagery and feel , congratulations on your win!
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Thanks For reading and for your congratulations, Best regards Eve
Pettit Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:26 PM
I'm sure Line will like this haiku entry. Good luck with it.
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:30 PM
Thanks for reading and your nice words Robert, I hope line will see what you already said
Buhagiar Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Lovely haiku.
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April 18, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Thanks for reading and the kind words. Dear friend Victor, best regards
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