Shipwrecked

ocean waves capsize
    a message in a bottle
    drifts upon the tide

    1 / 27 / 2019.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:37 PM
very nice, George. Congratulations on your win
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:04 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, George :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Wow, George. Awesome. A FAVE for me.
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Love the message in the bottle image, I always wanted to find one on a beach, congratulations on your winning placement!
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:20 AM
- Excellent haiku, George :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 12:04 AM
I've got the 'Police' song buzzing in my brain. So few words create a fabulous picture George:-) hugs jan xx
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