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Ships Figurehead

There once was a pirate from Antilles
That chased all the young beautiful fillies
To all a deception vow 
Carving of them on ships bow 
Lies brought doom, now lies in field of lilies


4/10/2019


Pirates Contest
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Syllables checked with how many syllables 10, 10, 7, 7, 10
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May Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Congrats on your win Eve..
Canerdy Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Eve! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Back with my Congrats, Eve. Hoping to catch up here eventually.
Kitchin Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Eve, I liked your clever limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 7:20 PM
good one, Eve. I like caren's name for him, lecherous.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 1:04 AM
It serves him right! That lecherous pirate! Ha! Great limerick Eve.
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:47 PM
what a clever rhyme Eve, I saw one of these figureheads in the nautical museum in Malta - they are huge!:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Interesting lines penned for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 12:19 AM
Antilles, fillies, and lillies - three wonderful rhyming words I have never used, I am pretty sure ANY of them. What a wonderful limerick, Eve!
Roper Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Now you have three words to play with, I just looked up The Caribbeans and I need a smaller syllable word . Thank you for your constant support. Hugs
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