Ships

Ships Cruiseship Large Fun Laughing, Dancing, Feasting Leisure, Water, Service, Task Drowning, Snatching, Praying Naval, Enemy Battleship

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/9/2009 3:38:00 PM

Better to be on a cruiseship rather than being attacked by a battleship. This one is a true diamond, Sara! I just realized that Doris must be one of your ´kuds. Thank you for your comment on Autumn inferno. Hope you are having agood time! Gert

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2009 1:57:00 PM

Cruiseship to Battleship, the depth of difference - although a cruiser is a type of battleship, bit i get your thoughts Sara >> James

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/9/2009 1:20:00 PM

I love the contrast here Sara, good idea and great write...Thanks for the comments on Hobo Jungle,,,,lol no I have never been a hobo, but if I were I would do it with pride. We had a old hobo that worked for us at the ranch, was one of my best teachers as a kid, learned a lot from him...Danny

Lynette Chachere

Date: 10/8/2009 4:03:00 PM

You have a child on poetrysoup. that must be awesome^.^ this poem sounds like fun.love a good cruise. -Lynette

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 9:42:00 AM

This style is fun HUH...... I am about to write another here soon.......I like your Diamante, well written Sara.....:JP]

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/8/2009 8:18:00 AM

Hello Sara, I thank you for reading my poem and your comments . Thought i should repay the compliment very nice short and sweet. Keep writting yourself and if you get a chance please read my poem Victoria it is much more from the heart and emotianal. Cheers

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 6:47:00 AM

good one mom!!