John Michaels Poet Haiku

Ship In a Bottle

Minuscule marvel;
a technical masterwork
entombed within glass.

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July 2014
Written for the "One Solo EPIC Senryu or Haiku - in a Bottle" competition.
Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A - Eleventh Place.

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Paul Callus April 23, 2017 at 3:48 PM In just three lines you bring to my mind a vivid picture of a ship in a bottle, John. Indeed they are a work of art! Regards // paul John Michaels April 29, 2017 at 10:13 AM Thanks very much, Paul!! Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2017 at 7:58 PM You describe it exactly!! John Michaels February 18, 2017 at 6:40 AM Thanks for your comments once again, Andrea.

Pandita Sietesantos February 11, 2017 at 8:14 AM Written in the style of the masters - beautifully crafted haiku! I'm taking notes! Bravo, John and a 7! Pandita John Michaels February 12, 2017 at 4:31 AM Having read a good number of your poems, I very much doubt you need to take notes based from mine, but thank you for the compliment!! Thanks for your support.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 21, 2014 at 5:35 AM very interesting write. congrats John Michaels February 12, 2017 at 4:30 AM Much appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

Robert Lindley August 20, 2014 at 10:34 PM Congrats on your win!!! John Michaels February 12, 2017 at 4:30 AM Apologies for the (very) late reply. Thank you for your kind comments.

Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2014 at 9:46 AM John,, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison July 21, 2014 at 4:43 PM Great haiku good luck in the contest. hug jan xx John Michaels August 7, 2014 at 4:44 AM Thanks, Jan. Have enjoyed reading some of your poems, too!