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Home » Poems » David Mohn » Ship In a Bottle

Ship In a Bottle

fog bank just astern bathroom fan is on the fritz… ship in a bottle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/21/2014 4:59:00 AM
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Congratulations on this nice win, david
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/20/2014 10:02:00 PM
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Congrats on your fine win!!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/20/2014 9:25:00 PM
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ahh, unique, well done david, grats on your win.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/20/2014 6:20:00 PM
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Nice one David...congrats
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John Lawless
Date: 8/20/2014 5:24:00 PM
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nice little twist in this senryu. good job.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/20/2014 3:09:00 PM
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a very interesting one. INventive!
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:33:00 AM
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David, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/20/2014 9:15:00 AM
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Excellent senryu, David, and congratulations on a top spot win. Sail on:) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/26/2014 7:17:00 AM
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witty poem that speaks much!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/21/2014 4:58:00 PM
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a very interesting one, my friend. You say so much in this little poem!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/19/2014 3:26:00 AM
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Wonderful write David,, luck in contest!
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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 7/19/2014 3:07:00 AM
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Wonder
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