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Ship In a Bottle

fog bank just astern
bathroom fan is on the fritz…
ship in a bottle

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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August 21, 2014 at 4:59 AM

Congratulations on this nice win, david

August 20, 2014 at 10:02 PM

Congrats on your fine win!!

August 20, 2014 at 9:25 PM

ahh, unique, well done david, grats on your win.

August 20, 2014 at 6:20 PM

Nice one David...congrats

August 20, 2014 at 5:24 PM

nice little twist in this senryu. good job.

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:09 PM

a very interesting one. INventive!

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:33 AM

David, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

August 20, 2014 at 9:15 AM

Excellent senryu, David, and congratulations on a top spot win. Sail on:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 26, 2014 at 7:17 AM

witty poem that speaks much!

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2014 at 4:58 PM

a very interesting one, my friend. You say so much in this little poem!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 19, 2014 at 3:26 AM

Wonderful write David,, luck in contest!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

July 19, 2014 at 3:07 AM

Wonder

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