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Shiny Minded Stone

"What's your story?" she questions, "you seem interesting." wildflower eyes ~SIDE-NOTE: I reply, "NOW." (Kwan$aba! Ha! Really, often people become confused by such a unique response not this one... she's a beauty shiny minded stone lives warm under veins lacks definition of alone tho solo she stands tallest green blade unscathed each time the oily blade passes above erect she stays the same tingling pulses exhale her pores she'd rather sink than have to think the way of worldly whores still... malice skips her no ripples in the lake dripping from her face sunshine slips across tangerine cheeks gold flows throughout waves streaming locks sky clear eyes surprise those choosing to be consumed by her entice hands free of envy no webs to spin hips unmolested thighs slick turpentine be warned she will divide you no voodoo or silly twisted games though safe may escape you blemish-less untangled... the girl she Goddess baby of zero maybes KNOWS.... how? she knows as clarity lent us its giant umbrella her lipstick smacked my tongue from there we never looked back ~JSLaM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/30/2012 1:25:00 AM
Well I sure am glad i read this beauty, Joey!! Only 33 reads!? I loved the imagery and words you put here, totally captivated me...enjoyed reading this immensely and yes, that sounds like some treasure of a woman, this is very romantic in a not too obvious way, which makes it even more romantic to me. Ha! I am weird! Faving this :D!
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Date: 1/21/2012 12:19:00 AM
You write so well- did this one become your wife?
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Date: 1/19/2012 10:07:00 PM
Yes, you do really well with this kind of poetry. WE are such complete opposites. I laboriously work on forms and you just let your free verse flow!! I don't know if I quite get this, but I love the images in it. Disney land? I would love it but I'm too poor to even take a FREE trip anywhere since I'd lose out on my work hours to survive once I got back from the trip . haha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2012 6:47:00 PM i love it.. very entertaining... and one smack never look back.. I love the middle verse after all we women are interesting ,,no matter the form.. great poem,..p.d.
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Date: 1/19/2012 3:52:00 PM
Interesting write there Joey! I enjoyed reading it this evening! Awesome Work!!
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