Shining Love

I need to feel true love
It's what I'm ever dreaming of
I pray with all my might
Every day and every night
Please give me all of you
In everything that you do

My love will shine like a star
Whether you're near or far
No matter where you go
You will always know
How much you mean to me
For my love will set you free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 8:08 PM
Dreamy and carefree. Romantic and so inviting. Your soft words shine bright in this heartfelt poem. Peace always, John
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December 7, 2008 at 2:11 AM
I believe this Janice! Hello dear lady~what a lovely written expression of love and promise I believe! For whom could be so fortunate, to have such a commiting heart to given unto themselves as this? And, you wrote these expressions so fluently and very well~touched I believe, with a deepened sincerety!~"Beautiful!"~"Much Warth & Love To You, Always, John!:)
Winter Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 1:04 PM
Hoping always your prayers are answered. You have so much love to give. A beautiful write filled with hope. Hugs, Shar xoxo
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