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Shining Like Brass

With salt in the air beyond sandy grass
Ocean waves crash on the rocky shore
Under golden sun, shining like brass

Beyond the dunes I could want no more
Where seagulls dive and the sailboats ride
Ocean waves crash on the rocky shore

Seashells float into the caves to hide
Everything rolls in the changing tide
Where seagulls dive and the sailboats ride

The horizon like arms open wide
There lies opportunities to see
Everything rolls in the changing tide

I am beginning to feel so free
There is always new hope to be found
There lies opportunities to see

I laugh with seagulls swirling around
With salt in the air beyond sandy grass
There is always new hope to be found
Under golden sun shining like brass

Heidi Sands  

8/10/20

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 8/14/2020 3:20:00 AM Such an evocative poem, Heidi. Your poetic prowess is clearly evident. Another gem of sparkling ink beauty. Love and more love always. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/14/2020 5:29:00 AM Hi Freddie. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Sending positive thoughts. Have a nice day :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/13/2020 9:48:00 AM Kudos Heidi a fantastic write - looks as if it could be a challenge to me to give it a try. Your poetry is really heartfelt - keep spilling ink my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/13/2020 1:08:00 PM Thank you for the kind comment, support and encouragement Jennifer. I appreciate it. Yes, it is a challenge. It took me some time to learn this form :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/11/2020 7:55:00 PM Every image so precious, Heidi! Kudos, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/12/2020 2:44:00 PM Thank you Gershon. I hope all is well and you have had a nice day :)

Jan Allison Date: 8/11/2020 11:07:00 AM what a charming poem Heidi i am not sure i have written this form it looks quite challenging:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/11/2020 11:12:00 AM Thank you Jan. It can be challenging to learn this form. Once I got more used to writing it, I enjoyed it more and more. I hope all is well and you are having a nice day. Take care. Hugs :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/11/2020 8:21:00 AM Uplifting poem. A hymn to nature and to beauty. Loved it dearest, Heidi. Hugs xxx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/11/2020 9:11:00 AM So happy that you loved this Demetrios. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day. Hugs :)

Jenish Somadas Date: 8/11/2020 4:00:00 AM Beautifully penned Heidi.. It is indeed shining like brass.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/11/2020 5:20:00 AM Thank you very much Jenish :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/11/2020 3:24:00 AM Beautiful poetry as always, Heidi:-) I plan on trying this interesting form in the future! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/11/2020 5:19:00 AM Thank you Edward. That is great you will be trying this form . Enjoy :)

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/10/2020 9:20:00 PM I can hear the waves, smell the salt air, feel the sun and see "golden sun, shining like brass" in your image filled words Heidi. What a wonderful picture! I love the poetic framework you used to format this poem! Thank you for sharing your time at the ocean! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/11/2020 5:18:00 AM I am happy this could bring you there in such a way Sam. Thank you for your comment and you are welcome :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2020 1:02:00 PM This is so beautiful and lively, Heidi..truly shining in glamour of nature. Wonderfully done--you always excel in this form my friend. A FAVE for me. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/10/2020 1:30:00 PM I am so happy to hear that Vijay. I do like that you enjoy this form I write. Thank you for your comment on this and the Fave! I hope you have a nice evening :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/10/2020 11:06:00 AM I love your description of the changes that come at the seashore when the tide changes. Could be a metaphor for life! Beautifully written, Heidi. Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/10/2020 11:40:00 AM Thank you very much Carolyn. I appreciate your kind comment today :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/10/2020 10:42:00 AM - A beautiful poem, Heidi - "There is always new hope to be found" - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/10/2020 10:50:00 AM Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I appreciate your input :) Hugs