Shining Like Brass

With salt in the air beyond sandy grass
Ocean waves crash on the rocky shore
Under golden sun, shining like brass

Beyond the dunes I could want no more
Where seagulls dive and the sailboats ride
Ocean waves crash on the rocky shore

Seashells float into the caves to hide
Everything rolls in the changing tide
Where seagulls dive and the sailboats ride

The horizon like arms open wide
There lies opportunities to see
Everything rolls in the changing tide

I am beginning to feel so free
There is always new hope to be found
There lies opportunities to see

I laugh with seagulls swirling around
With salt in the air beyond sandy grass
There is always new hope to be found
Under golden sun shining like brass

Heidi Sands  

8/10/20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/14/2020 3:20:00 AM
Such an evocative poem, Heidi. Your poetic prowess is clearly evident. Another gem of sparkling ink beauty. Love and more love always.
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Date: 8/14/2020 5:29:00 AM
Hi Freddie. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Sending positive thoughts. Have a nice day :)
Date: 8/13/2020 9:48:00 AM
Kudos Heidi a fantastic write - looks as if it could be a challenge to me to give it a try. Your poetry is really heartfelt - keep spilling ink my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 8/13/2020 1:08:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment, support and encouragement Jennifer. I appreciate it. Yes, it is a challenge. It took me some time to learn this form :)
Date: 8/11/2020 7:55:00 PM
Every image so precious, Heidi! Kudos, Gershon
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Date: 8/12/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I hope all is well and you have had a nice day :)
Date: 8/11/2020 11:07:00 AM
what a charming poem Heidi i am not sure i have written this form it looks quite challenging:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Jan. It can be challenging to learn this form. Once I got more used to writing it, I enjoyed it more and more. I hope all is well and you are having a nice day. Take care. Hugs :)
Date: 8/11/2020 8:21:00 AM
Uplifting poem. A hymn to nature and to beauty. Loved it dearest, Heidi. Hugs xxx
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Date: 8/11/2020 9:11:00 AM
So happy that you loved this Demetrios. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day. Hugs :)
Date: 8/11/2020 4:00:00 AM
Beautifully penned Heidi.. It is indeed shining like brass..
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Date: 8/11/2020 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Jenish :)
Date: 8/11/2020 3:24:00 AM
Beautiful poetry as always, Heidi:-) I plan on trying this interesting form in the future!
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Date: 8/11/2020 5:19:00 AM
Thank you Edward. That is great you will be trying this form . Enjoy :)
Date: 8/10/2020 9:20:00 PM
I can hear the waves, smell the salt air, feel the sun and see "golden sun, shining like brass" in your image filled words Heidi. What a wonderful picture! I love the poetic framework you used to format this poem! Thank you for sharing your time at the ocean!
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Date: 8/11/2020 5:18:00 AM
I am happy this could bring you there in such a way Sam. Thank you for your comment and you are welcome :)
Date: 8/10/2020 1:02:00 PM
This is so beautiful and lively, Heidi..truly shining in glamour of nature. Wonderfully done--you always excel in this form my friend. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 8/10/2020 1:30:00 PM
I am so happy to hear that Vijay. I do like that you enjoy this form I write. Thank you for your comment on this and the Fave! I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 8/10/2020 11:06:00 AM
I love your description of the changes that come at the seashore when the tide changes. Could be a metaphor for life! Beautifully written, Heidi. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn. I appreciate your kind comment today :)
Date: 8/10/2020 10:42:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Heidi - "There is always new hope to be found" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/10/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I appreciate your input :) Hugs
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