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Shining In Poetry's Light

lovely Line is a lady who lingers in deep thought- her style shines with wit; a simile or two with a touch of personification in free verse poems, shares the freedom to embrace her muse as if she never embraced before- leads others into the abyss of her mind’s eye reaching depths never before allowed- for her words wisp me o’er a sun kissed cloud sweet Sandy’s muse bleeds solitude- she sways the trees in the breeze of sorrow in front of me and all i want to do is… hug her forever for she feels the kind of pain only the strong feel, and her strength shines in each poem written; her style is as beautiful as the eventide sun setting in the western sky, for her words make me want to cry my style seems different, yet similar to few; my metaphors make melancholy proud, finding the time for internal rhyme, making meter much more sweeter- each day I write as if it was the last, every syllable noted is full of the kind of emotional fury only my soul can write with harvesting a haibun of hope, always feeding my parchment echoes of affection and adorning amour yet i endure the burden of wearing a muse of woe- anguish runs through my veins and my words run awry with alliteration and personification for my words fill my soul with inspiration THREE GIFTED POETS SHINING IN POETRY'S LIGHT, ARE AN ENCOURAGEMENT TO ALL WHO WRITE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1.) Line Gauthier 2.) Sandra Adams 3.) Me :) 12.19.19 You've Got Style Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/15/2020 2:07:00 PM
Lu Loo, this is your love letter to two very talented writers and your admiration and respect for their words and friendship shine through your lovely poem. "Finding the time for internal rhyme" is a fun line, as is "making meter much more sweeter", as well as your multiple alliterations, but this is gorgeous through and through. So glad I read this ~ John
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Date: 1/15/2020 10:04:00 AM
Awesome, Lu Loo. Your imagery here is beautiful, emotional and touching. Congrats on a most deserving gold medal win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2020 11:20:00 AM
thank you! I am honored, really enjoyed this contest it made me appreciate your gift more! be blessed x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2019 8:23:00 PM
Lu this is so beautifully written and you captured Line and Sandra and yourself perfectly, well done!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2019 7:18:00 AM
thank you sweet lady, and thank you again for including me in your style poem, I am very honored. You'll never know how much your poetry means to me also. Always have and always will. Be blessed and Merry Christmas x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2019 4:55:00 PM
wow...i am amazed by your poem my beautiful friend...your words always touch, always reach, you have depths of all of life from deep pain than makes me cry with you, to beautiful romance that makes me feel the voids in life ...i am deeply touched that you included me in this write for Line's contest...best wishes to you but i think this one will shine at the top...it already shines to me... hugs :)
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Date: 12/20/2019 7:17:00 AM
you amaze me sweet lady, everything you write astounds me. You hold a true gift in your pen. Your muse makes it easy to write about you. Thank you for the inspiration. Be blessed, Merry Christmas x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2019 4:31:00 PM
Well, you've got three of my favorites in this wonderful poem. All three I look up to and find inspiration in every time I read. Beautifully done Luloo. You are an amazing talent and it shines in every thing you do. This one is already a winner in my book.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2019 7:15:00 AM
you never cease to make me smile dear friend. Thank you very much...x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2019 4:26:00 PM
I enjoyed this. Fine poets you speak of. Best of luck in the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2019 7:14:00 AM
thank you dear Greg! You are the best...x:-)-luloo

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