Shining Candlelight Flickers Inside

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one in a hundred starting with cloud nine

then thirteen each line which could mean unlucky under the clouds

seven steps comes with a deep reflection upwards

The closer to heaven we become dreams are born pure 
love the finest silk beams ivory on this earth's breath 

Dewdrops weep for the night as starlight crystals drop down 
amazing grace under a silver chalice drinking
 
From the moonshine is where the song sings loudest glory 
drunken echoes return over the mountains smiling 
tonight the moon finds peace casting shadows in her wake

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 5/10/2017 11:29:00 PM

Breathtaking imagery ... you have the magic and structure now this is excellent piece.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/2/2017 3:52:00 PM

Dear Liam Mate!! Another wondrous and exquisite golden-pen exposition my friend. The flow and tenor of your verses here highlight the imagery even more. Most Excellent!! TR/FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I like your inclusion of the Author's Notes here. I know you've spoken to me in the past of the information you covered in your notes. GB)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/2/2017 5:03:00 PM

gary you know me pal i thought of structuring this in a different way to give it appeal seven steps in thirteen counts which ever way the coin tips as far as the number is concerned thought i would try something different for a change copying you gary smiling putting the thought process into notes behind the scenes wishing you both a blessed week thank you dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/1/2017 6:00:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/2/2017 4:55:00 PM

dorian thank you so kindly for the lovely comment bless you