Shine On

a beacon of light 
transparent through clouds clusters
reflects off stilled bay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 22, 2010 at 4:08 PM
So beautiful Kathy!!! Congrats on your win - so well deserved! What a joy to hear from you! Thanks for your thoughtful congrats. Hope all is well with you and yours - have missed you so very much. Love and hugs always, shar xoxo
White Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Very nice reflection- Congrats on your win Katherine
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April 25, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Nicely done, Katherine. Congratulations on your 4th place in Raul's contest.! Love, Carrie
La France Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Very pretty haiku, best of luck in the contest, now for your assignment, in my contest, how about .. the importance of music, in our lifes... love constance
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April 24, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Wow! Wonderful and peaceful view. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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April 24, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Good luck with this excellent Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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April 24, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Good luck in the Vanilla Sky contest Katherine with this Shine On Haiku..luv it..Linda-Marie..
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