Shine and Stare On

Tonight, the moon's staring at me Does it suspect I'm writing about it Really, it must ~ Why else the fuss

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2022 12:54:00 PM

But its happy, that is why the moon will sing you a tune, and if it suspects you, it knows your heart is true. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 8:37:00 PM

The moon may think my heart is true; but if it indicts me, I shall sue!! ~ A. Torn Knee

Bill Baker

Date: 8/12/2022 2:39:00 PM

Me thinks ye may be a bit paranoid, my friend, or just plain moonstruck. Either way, I liked the poem! Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 8:36:00 PM

I'm both, paranoid and moonstruck. And a lot of other things I don't have the desire to list. ~ Taking the 5th...

Michael Tor

Date: 8/12/2022 4:14:00 AM

I can feel the moon just peering at me when seeing its glow. Saw a full moon last night. It was captivating called my wife out and we looked at it for a while. Such a sureal feeling when watching Gershon...

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/11/2022 9:28:00 PM

What a marvelous situation! :D

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/13/2022 10:15:00 PM

It's all in fun. I don't think he minds. :D

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 8:31:00 PM

Ha, ha! I sure am stringing Mr. Moonface along, don't you think?! :) gw

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/11/2022 9:01:00 PM

Manstruck!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 8:29:00 PM

Heh-heh. Well, man struck by moon, anyway. Thanks, Shirley.