Shine

A grim, gray day,
endless rain coming in off the ocean.
Endless calls from other people,
"What part do we need for this?"
"Can you order it for us?"
"A happened and then B happened, what does it mean?"
"Do we hold this part toward the motor side,
or toward the brake side of the centrifuge,
when we're tightening it up on the horizontal shaft?"

There he was.
At the grocery store, picking up some stuff -
we were going to be working late that night.
God, people are slow,
wandering around like they don't know what they want,
like they have no other place to go.
Get out of my way,
get out of my way.
Tunnel vision in the fog,
man on a mission,
big mass moving at speed
to the end of the task.

There he was, 
in his mom's shopping cart,
staring at me.
Little guy, probably 2 years old,
'Popeye' looking with a knit cap on his head,
half winking at me with one eye.
Smiling. 

He was beyond 'stranger anxiety' or never had it.
He looked at me, and he knew me -
I was one of his.
He was a shaman, an imp,
a grinning cherub with a touch of guile.
So young, but he was aware,
aware that he *was,*
and that on the other end,
there was somebody who also was,
and he felt the humor and joy
which surely must be mystical.

I've thought of him a thousand times,
his little face.
A bright sun in a dark universe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 16, 2016 at 12:19 AM
This is absolutely ace... I see this, and then the expressions you use here... he was aware he was.... and there was somebody who also was? fave for me and 7
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December 16, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Thank you, Darren! Kids like 2 or 3 years old..... amazing. : )
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December 15, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Your story telling abilities get better with every post of your I read. This flat out blew me away. I could see this entire scene as if I were there in the express line watching you two have your moment. This is so damn cool Doug. Wow, your talent is crazy good.
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December 15, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Thanks, Chris. I can see a few morals of the story here. Little kids can be really cool. Life will spring surprises on us. Even for the Grim Reaper in the supermarket, there is yet hope of redemption.
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December 15, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Two beautiful lines: 'Endless rain coming in off the ocean' ... and, 'A bright sun in a dark universe' ... a nice shine in the whole poem ... enjoyed and learned ...
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December 15, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Good deal, Probir. : ) I think we all have at least a few episodes like that in life. Maybe a lot more than a few, and if we write them down then we won't forget so many of them.
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December 14, 2016 at 11:22 PM
When two kindred spirits meet age is no boundary! Plus we can learn a great deal from the youth just as they can from us. A great write, Doug. I enjoyed this one.
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December 15, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thank you, Rick. You are a good man.
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