Shielded Sight

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Written: November 13, 2023
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The waning sun brightens the skies. 
Love carries you home via meadows.
She would have time to shield her eyes. 
The waning sun brightens the skies.
While he was humming he stayed wise.
Young swoons are playing with shadows.
The waning sun brightens the skies.
Love carries you home via meadows.

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Jay Narain

Date: 11/14/2023 10:17:00 AM

Nice love poem.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2023 10:00:00 AM

Very well composed Triolet, my friend, love and imagery at the same time. Enjoyed reading.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/14/2023 8:29:00 AM

What a beautiful and soulful scene you’ve painted through this form of poetry, truly i am in awe of the way you’ve crafted this. I did write few triolets in the past, i am not a fan of refrains or repeating words but some poets like you are so talented and can make anything sound impeccable and beautiful for the readers eyes and soul, thats what you’ve done here especially with the line “ Young swoons are playing with shadows. The waning sun brightens the skie“ deeply moving and touching.love it

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2023 7:27:00 AM

Lovely romantic poem, Sotto. Lovely imagery. Blessings

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/14/2023 7:26:00 AM

Lovely, expressive triolet, Sotto Poet. Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2023 6:16:00 AM

The waning sun brightens the skies Love carries you home via meadows---these lines brought to fore the essence of your theme, my friend. Images well woven with feelings.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/13/2023 3:34:00 PM

So dreamy... enjoyed!