Lonna Blodgett Poet Dodoitsu

Shhhhhhh, Listen

Hidden orange trees painted
Migration of low-flung sun
Small hand in mine held sweetly
Bares autumnal hearts simple love's
Exquisite secret


October 2, 2020


Dodoitsu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France

Brian Strand 1093 Poetry Contest
March 20, 2022

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Christuraj Alex March 22, 2022 at 2:00 AM "love's Exquisite secret" - Beautiful. Congratulations! Lonna Blodgett March 24, 2022 at 6:10 PM Thank you very much Christuraj! Lonna

John Watt October 7, 2020 at 11:26 AM A perfect title for quietly taking in the majesty of a sunset on a beautiful autumn day shared with one you hold so dear. Small hand = child? grandchild? That's how I like to interpret this, Lonna. Sharing nature's wonder with a little one. So glad I read this today. Blessings to you, my friend ~ John Lonna Blodgett October 9, 2020 at 8:51 AM Hi John, So good hearing your wonderful comments again. Yes, it was written about a grandchild. Love going on nature walks with them. Thanks for all your words.

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2020 at 6:15 PM wow I am seeing so many gems with this form being written this week. Love yours! Lonna Blodgett October 9, 2020 at 8:49 AM Thanks Andrea. I had fun with it as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 1:31 PM - Yes, true love ... beautiful, Lonna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lonna Blodgett October 9, 2020 at 8:49 AM Good to hear from you. Thanks for the comments.