Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Shhhhh

Shhhh whisper
Cause I love your very breath
Your whispers breathes into me
Nothing sweeter not even death
The wisps of it glides over me
Tickling every inch my silken skin
Making me reach out to you 
As I try to pull you in

Shhhh let's not speak no more
Let's lay within our embrace
Looking into the eyes I adore
As fingertips trace your face
Let our souls do the talking 
Like only they can do
Let your fingers do the walking
I trust in you I know your true

Shhhhh let our bodies mingle
Let's share each other's sighs
How your touch makes me tingle
In such simple hushed replies
Share your essence and I will mine 
Let's go in slow motion 
As our bodies start to entwine
Sweat feeling like satin lotion

Shhh let ecstasy tow the line
Let our beings articulate
The passions so Devine 
Shhh let's stimulate 


1st place

STRAND SELECT 7 any form,any theme' Poetry Contest
Sponsor;Brian Strand

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Krish Radhakrishna January 29, 2020 at 9:24 AM Beautiful descriptive sensuous poem! Well done! Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 10:36 AM Krish thank you so much!;)

Anisha Dutta January 10, 2020 at 10:51 AM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP Brenda Chiri January 11, 2020 at 5:31 PM Anisha thank you my friend!;)

Michael Craig January 10, 2020 at 10:00 AM A poem that shows such deep feelings. Congratulations on the top winning poem. - Brenda. Brenda Chiri January 11, 2020 at 5:31 PM Thank you so much!;)

L. J. Carber January 10, 2020 at 9:58 AM Kinda hot!! congrats, Brenda Brenda Chiri January 11, 2020 at 5:31 PM Thank you LJ! You are too kind!;)

Sandra Adams January 9, 2020 at 7:26 PM wonderful write Brenda... congrats on your top win! :) Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 7:42 PM Thank you Sandy I was pleasantly surprised!;)

John Watt January 9, 2020 at 4:10 PM An amorous and sensuous journey, Brenda - beautifully written. Congrats on your top placement ~ John Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:28 PM John thank you so very much!;)

John Gondolf January 9, 2020 at 2:25 PM Congrats on your top win, Bren, you seem to be doing quite well in the contests lately. :) Hugs, John Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:27 PM Yea I seen that too! Been placing high on most of them I think I've had like 4 na's lately! Don't know what's different unless my writing has improved a bit!;) but thank you so much John for even noticing that!;) you always did notice the little things;)

Ann Gilmour January 9, 2020 at 1:56 PM This is such a beautifully romantic poem Brenda, congratulations on your top spot. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:23 PM Ann thank you so much! I'm happy you visited today! It's always a pleasure!;)

Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 1:45 PM Congrats Brenda--you shine at the TOP of first place with this lovely romantic whisper. Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:22 PM Lol thank you Vijay I appreciate that!;)

Connie Marcum Wong January 9, 2020 at 1:40 PM A romantic delight Brenda! Congratulations on your wonderful First placement! xxoo Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:22 PM Connie thank you so very much!;) your visit is appreciated!;)

Sam Kauffman January 9, 2020 at 12:49 PM What a lovely poem - beautiful images -"sweat feeling like satin lotion" nice contrasting images. Congratulations on your first place win, my friend. Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:21 PM Sam thx so much for stopping by!;)

Eve Roper January 9, 2020 at 12:38 PM your pen full of romantic love, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:21 PM Ahh thank you so much Eve!;)

Beautiful Scars January 9, 2020 at 12:21 PM wow! Now this is MY kind of poem girly :) Right on spot lol, loved this so much, you never cease to amaze me! Hugs x:-)-luloo Brenda Chiri January 9, 2020 at 6:20 PM Haha thank you so much Laura! And I love your comments!;)

Elaine Perrin October 6, 2019 at 2:52 PM So sensual and steamy! I love it :-) x Brenda Chiri October 6, 2019 at 3:15 PM Thank you so much!;)

Winged Warrior October 2, 2019 at 7:26 AM What are we shhhishing about?...did someone let one go?...oh! its sissy writing her brilliant verses...keep on writing my beautiful sis...puff puff part two coming soon... bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:23 AM Lmao! Bro bro I can not wait for part two! Puff puff loved it she just kept looking st me like gma wtf are you reading and who is puff puff lmao! Thank you WW you are far to kind to your sister!;)

Chris Green October 2, 2019 at 7:06 AM I will whisper my comment...soft, sensual and beautiful my friend. Your poem is a whisper of affection, desire and wondrous love. Beautifully done. Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:21 AM Ah thank you Chris! I wasn't too sure about this but it did have a flow to it! !;)

Tom Cunningham October 2, 2019 at 12:16 AM Very romantic imagery Brenda, I hope everything is okay for you now. Tom Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 12:22 AM Thank you Tom just awaiting some tests now and hoping it goes ok! Didn't want to sit around feeling sorry for myself so I started to write again! Thanks so much for asking!;)