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Shhhh whisper Cause I love your very breath Your whispers breathes into me Nothing sweeter not even death The wisps of it glides over me Tickling every inch my silken skin Making me reach out to you As I try to pull you in Shhhh let's not speak no more Let's lay within our embrace Looking into the eyes I adore As fingertips trace your face Let our souls do the talking Like only they can do Let your fingers do the walking I trust in you I know your true Shhhhh let our bodies mingle Let's share each other's sighs How your touch makes me tingle In such simple hushed replies Share your essence and I will mine Let's go in slow motion As our bodies start to entwine Sweat feeling like satin lotion Shhh let ecstasy tow the line Let our beings articulate The passions so Devine Shhh let's stimulate
1st place STRAND SELECT 7 any form,any theme' Poetry Contest Sponsor;Brian Strand

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Date: 1/29/2020 9:24:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive sensuous poem! Well done!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:36:00 AM
Krish thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/10/2020 10:51:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2020 5:31:00 PM
Anisha thank you my friend!;)
Date: 1/10/2020 10:00:00 AM
A poem that shows such deep feelings. Congratulations on the top winning poem. - Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2020 5:31:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/10/2020 9:58:00 AM
Kinda hot!! congrats, Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2020 5:31:00 PM
Thank you LJ! You are too kind!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 7:26:00 PM
wonderful write Brenda... congrats on your top win! :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Sandy I was pleasantly surprised!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 4:10:00 PM
An amorous and sensuous journey, Brenda - beautifully written. Congrats on your top placement ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:28:00 PM
John thank you so very much!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Bren, you seem to be doing quite well in the contests lately. :) Hugs, John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:27:00 PM
Yea I seen that too! Been placing high on most of them I think I've had like 4 na's lately! Don't know what's different unless my writing has improved a bit!;) but thank you so much John for even noticing that!;) you always did notice the little things;)
Date: 1/9/2020 1:56:00 PM
This is such a beautifully romantic poem Brenda, congratulations on your top spot. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:23:00 PM
Ann thank you so much! I'm happy you visited today! It's always a pleasure!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 1:45:00 PM
Congrats Brenda--you shine at the TOP of first place with this lovely romantic whisper.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:22:00 PM
Lol thank you Vijay I appreciate that!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 1:40:00 PM
A romantic delight Brenda! Congratulations on your wonderful First placement! xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:22:00 PM
Connie thank you so very much!;) your visit is appreciated!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 12:49:00 PM
What a lovely poem - beautiful images -"sweat feeling like satin lotion" nice contrasting images. Congratulations on your first place win, my friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:21:00 PM
Sam thx so much for stopping by!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 12:38:00 PM
your pen full of romantic love, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:21:00 PM
Ahh thank you so much Eve!;)
Date: 1/9/2020 12:21:00 PM
wow! Now this is MY kind of poem girly :) Right on spot lol, loved this so much, you never cease to amaze me! Hugs x:-)-luloo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/9/2020 6:20:00 PM
Haha thank you so much Laura! And I love your comments!;)
Date: 10/6/2019 2:52:00 PM
So sensual and steamy! I love it :-) x
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/6/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 10/2/2019 7:26:00 AM
What are we shhhishing about?...did someone let one go?...oh! its sissy writing her brilliant verses...keep on writing my beautiful sis...puff puff part two coming soon... bro bro :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:23:00 AM
Lmao! Bro bro I can not wait for part two! Puff puff loved it she just kept looking st me like gma wtf are you reading and who is puff puff lmao! Thank you WW you are far to kind to your sister!;)
Date: 10/2/2019 7:06:00 AM
I will whisper my comment...soft, sensual and beautiful my friend. Your poem is a whisper of affection, desire and wondrous love. Beautifully done.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:21:00 AM
Ah thank you Chris! I wasn't too sure about this but it did have a flow to it! !;)
Date: 10/2/2019 12:16:00 AM
Very romantic imagery Brenda, I hope everything is okay for you now. Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 12:22:00 AM
Thank you Tom just awaiting some tests now and hoping it goes ok! Didn't want to sit around feeling sorry for myself so I started to write again! Thanks so much for asking!;)

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