Wilma Neels Poet Rhyme

Shhh.... Can You Keep a Secret

Your voice rang out
In the still of the night
Your voice became quiet 
With the dawning of light

Why become visible
When everything is dark 
Why become invisible 
When everything is stark

Reality screams to remain
To reveal the boldness of your game
visible even to my love blind eyes…

We're supposed to be a secret, 
a notion to be shared, only by us…

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Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2012 at 5:35 AM Here is a very interesting one dealing with a secret love?? One I had not had the pleasure to read before. I think I may have to be coming back to these old pages of your poetry to find poems of yours, Wilma. This one makes me wonder about his secret!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2010 at 11:07 PM go go ms. fickle hahahaha now I am a fickle judge so you'll never know if I lik eit or not --- tough luck ;) go write me about that fickle mole ;) thank you oh fickle one!

Kris Walters August 7, 2010 at 7:45 PM I love those last 2 lines! Have a nice weekend too! Hugs, kris

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2010 at 10:40 AM uh-oh I shouldn't have read this?? eep what to do? what to do? Let me scream this in somewhere hidden now?? kidding! enjoyed this one! How was you Saturday? Thanks for all your comments & haha yup see eventually I did get to judge my contest ;) now I think I will post another one-- hopeless me

Gert W. Knop August 7, 2010 at 5:49 AM Hi Wilma, dankie vir jou kommentaar! Enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Here it is raining cats and dogs so I prefered to stay at home!....Baie geluk en 'n lekker Sondag! ...Gert:)

Doris Culverhouse August 7, 2010 at 5:42 AM very romantic...