Shhh

my heart finds love
             my heart sadly breaks
                           a tear falls and dies on my face
            
                  silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Silence is dangerous, like a fishing trip to the bottom of the ocean...but if you make it back, it is pretty much gratifying and enlightening. Thanks a lot for sharing =)
Al-Riyami Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 7:20 AM
i LOVE how you ended this one wih silence.It captured the whole poem Beautifull.(P.S I MIIIIISH YEW!*.*)
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 3:54 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Jese. It was a pleasure to read such an indepth write.Love, Carol
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