Shh Water Spider Is Sleeping

Shh!
The water spider is sleeping.

She stared at the raised clear bubble on her friend’s wrist
Then she ran away screaming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/18/2019 5:43:00 AM
This is a wonderful little poem Caren. Very enjoyable. Thanks.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/18/2019 11:48:00 AM
Using the diving bell technique is brilliant. I believe there are several beetles that do this as well Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/18/2019 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Jeff. I know a lot about spiders!
Date: 9/21/2019 11:10:00 PM
Ha, ha. Cute one. Just what my sisters would have done years ago. So relatable. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2019 6:27:00 AM
I do not like to think of them "under the skin" and yet, I believe it can be done.
Date: 9/21/2019 8:16:00 AM
I love spiders...especially their webs...lovely read Caren...hope all is good my friend....^WW^ :o)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/21/2019 11:03:00 PM
All is well. About forty years ago I had a bubble of a spider bite on my wrist. Although there was no spider in there, there is STILL a scar from it.
Date: 9/20/2019 10:53:00 PM
i run and scream at the site of most bugs, but spiders especially ...cute! hugs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/21/2019 11:04:00 PM
Spiders do not bother me as much now that I have fallen in love with their webs in rain.
Date: 9/20/2019 10:29:00 PM
I loved this...it is exactly what I would do! lol. Thank you for the cheer! xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/21/2019 11:04:00 PM
You are so welcome Connie! Ha!
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