She/The Epilogue

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                                           Free, floating, going, instanteously



                                   Oh! what beauty, what a beautiful garden, roses......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 8:07 AM
LIke a dream fulfilled Sara.Rgds Brian
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Sara, This reminds me of spring...and summer. Smiles, Dane Ann
Freeman Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:18 PM
Free flowing, like the wind or water, the beauty of Agape in roses. Smile. Sincerely, love, Moses
Chachere Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:59 PM
'She' is a nice beginning to this story your working up<: gardens are amazing. -Always Lynette
Culverhouse Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 1:28 PM
very nice, should be a winner!! good luck
Sweetheart Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Visual words .. I miss my garden during these winter months... all the colors as u have portrayed perhaps with that missing line... great imagism and if this is your entry good luck also.. thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry reads.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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