She/The Epilogue

... Free, floating, going, instanteously Oh! what beauty, what a beautiful garden, roses......

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Brian Strand

Date: 2/10/2010 8:07:00 AM

LIke a dream fulfilled Sara.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/10/2010 6:24:00 AM

Sara, This reminds me of spring...and summer. Smiles, Dane Ann

John Freeman

Date: 2/8/2010 10:18:00 PM

Free flowing, like the wind or water, the beauty of Agape in roses. Smile. Sincerely, love, Moses

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/8/2010 5:59:00 PM

'She' is a nice beginning to this story your working up<: gardens are amazing. -Always Lynette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 1:28:00 PM

very nice, should be a winner!! good luck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2010 5:21:00 AM

Visual words .. I miss my garden during these winter months... all the colors as u have portrayed perhaps with that missing line... great imagism and if this is your entry good luck also.. thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry reads.. luv.. Linda-Marie..