She's the Girl

She's the girl who always catches negative thoughts,

She's the girl who's always blamed,

She's the girl who's judged by everyone,

She's the girl who runs and hides from her problems,

She's the girl who always regrets,

She's the girl who bows down her head and being quiet in the corner,

She's the girl who's forced to be someone,

She's the girl who needs time for herself,

She's the girl who questions life,

She closed her eyes, a tear fell down

She wants to run away,

Run away to a place where she can be herself

To shout her feelings,

To cry freely,

To express herself more,

To drop the mask she's been wearing all the time,

But that's impossible for her to happen

She opens her eyes, quietly crying

Cause she knows before the impossible will happen,

She has to end her life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/30/2017 10:27:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them
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Date: 10/20/2016 1:55:00 AM
Wow such a nice poem it is. Being a beginner, it's an inspiration for me. Keep writing. And congratulations. Have a nice day!
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Date: 10/12/2016 11:23:00 PM
Condemned...by her own thoughts. Somebody said, in a classroom to me once...problem resides just in our head and a cool head changes our perspective and helps us decide how to go about minimising harm to ourselves and others! Your writing is so revealing. Congrats and all the best. :)
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Date: 10/12/2016 2:23:00 PM
Who ever this girl is I feel very bad and sad for her.its like she is almost invisible to everyone and even when she is noticed she's not thought of at all. I consider poem to be sad and well written. I want to give you and tthis girl a million hugs. Awesome right!
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Date: 10/12/2016 11:01:00 AM
wow!just liked the poem
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome everyone ^_^ To tell you the truth, writing poems is like my second diary. If I can't express it like talking, I make it into poem... That's why some of them are a bit deep :)
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Date: 10/1/2016 3:21:00 PM
Oh no... there are more reasons to keep holding and live your life. You are in the right place now. Keep your ink overflowing.. Let the world hear you cry... We are one family here in Poetry Soup... Welcome and congrats to your good start!! :O) hugs, Aiyah
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:14:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Princess. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:06:00 PM
Princess, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2016 8:01:00 PM
Hi Skat :) thanks for welcoming me ^^
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