She's So Fine

Wiling away
my way
or the thorough
fare up front
if you know
what to look for
wiles do
have a very fine sheen

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/14/2019 9:45:00 PM

Maureen, Genuine wiles and genius sheen. Fine, she most definitely is. A fave of course -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/14/2019 10:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Richard, I'm thrilled you like it so. It was a cathartic out of the blue write, but I didn't want to limit it by too many words, if that makes sense. xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/3/2019 7:55:00 AM

I am not immune to a women’s Wiles. This piece brought a smile. Perhaps I am safer to occupy myself by watching Wiley Coyote.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/3/2019 7:59:00 AM

Lol! A much safer walking disaster. ;D, xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/2/2019 1:59:00 PM

The sheen of love...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/3/2019 7:39:00 AM

A thin film title ;),

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/2/2019 11:07:00 AM

Seeing a wile is very unusual Maureen. Recalling Winnie Pooh's trying to catch a Heffalump. The wily wiles are very difficult, but I think this poem captured one. I hope you have backup video proof. But I don't think she's so fine; one's own beauty takes on pomposity. After awhile I think I'd just wile away the time. And settle for a true WOW!!!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/3/2019 9:51:00 AM

Great Maureen!!! All seems to be falling into place. Small term goals pump up happiness, while helping to encourage long term goals.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/3/2019 7:56:00 AM

Giggles! I do have digital proof ;), No, her wiles didn't work on me, dodged that one like a first grade dodgeball queen. And, I got my WOW. I'm proud of myself; boundaries. Day 3 no cigarettes, going to need my all for new client tmrw, lovely old friends' 4mos old husky/dachshund girl named Kazoo :))))