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She's So Fine

Wiling away my way or the thorough fare up front if you know what to look for wiles do have a very fine sheen

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Date: 9/14/2019 9:45:00 PM
Maureen, Genuine wiles and genius sheen. Fine, she most definitely is. A fave of course -Richard
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/14/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard, I'm thrilled you like it so. It was a cathartic out of the blue write, but I didn't want to limit it by too many words, if that makes sense. xomo!
Date: 9/3/2019 7:55:00 AM
I am not immune to a women’s Wiles. This piece brought a smile. Perhaps I am safer to occupy myself by watching Wiley Coyote.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2019 7:59:00 AM
Lol! A much safer walking disaster. ;D, xomo!
Date: 9/2/2019 1:59:00 PM
The sheen of love...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2019 7:39:00 AM
A thin film title ;),
Date: 9/2/2019 11:07:00 AM
Seeing a wile is very unusual Maureen. Recalling Winnie Pooh's trying to catch a Heffalump. The wily wiles are very difficult, but I think this poem captured one. I hope you have backup video proof. But I don't think she's so fine; one's own beauty takes on pomposity. After awhile I think I'd just wile away the time. And settle for a true WOW!!!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/3/2019 9:51:00 AM
Great Maureen!!! All seems to be falling into place. Small term goals pump up happiness, while helping to encourage long term goals.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2019 7:56:00 AM
Giggles! I do have digital proof ;), No, her wiles didn't work on me, dodged that one like a first grade dodgeball queen. And, I got my WOW. I'm proud of myself; boundaries. Day 3 no cigarettes, going to need my all for new client tmrw, lovely old friends' 4mos old husky/dachshund girl named Kazoo :))))
Date: 9/2/2019 10:40:00 AM
Oh yes! nice one Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2019 8:02:00 AM
You know her too eh ;), Thank you Jeanne! xomo
Date: 9/2/2019 8:47:00 AM
Very cool my friend. Your work is always so creative and unique.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/3/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris :) xomon<3

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