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She's On My Mind

Everyone says that I deserve better When they say that, my face couldn’t be wetter I haven’t met a single girl like you That had me wanting to say I do I miss you more than I can bare When I see you, I wish I could stop and stare But I have to move on, I cant look your way Or else these feelings will never go away But I don’t want them to go, I want to be In love with you for eternity I wish you would write on my wall Or even greet me with a simple call A text would make me feel so nice A simple “hey” would suffice My family says I shouldn’t speak to you But letting go is the last thing I want to do I let you go way too soon And now my emotions are a monsoon That control my mind and my heart Why cant we just go to the start And pretend as if I never knew That I’d find love that’s so true And wed fall in love all over again And be together until the very end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2016 7:41:00 PM
Ha, Bilbo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 3:06:00 PM
BILBO, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Bilbo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:28:00 AM
So beautiful!! Good job! ~Michelle~ xo
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