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She's Leaving

The clock on the mantle, quietly chimed ten As she placed the note by its face Then checking herself in the mirror She walked to the door, to pick up her case, The note told him, that she was leaving That her love for him had died And without that love, she’d be living a lie No matter how hard she tried She hadn’t wanted to leave him this way She wanted to tell him, face to face But knew if she did, he’d persuade her to stay Then she’d never get out of this place. You see, she’d tried to leave him twice before But he’d always talked her around And made her a prisoner, in her own home Whilst driving her spirit into the ground She’d lived this way for seven years, But now the worm had turned She was leaving her life of servitude, To find the true love that she yearned. As she put on her coat and walked through the door She harboured no feelings of sorrow For she knew she was crossing the threshold To a life with a brighter tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/18/2012 5:33:00 PM
Sometimes hard decisions are ... well, just hard... nice work...Terry
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on having all 3 of your poems move to the finals. Best of luck! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:33:00 PM
Thanks, Janette, for your comment. The same back at you :) Congratulations! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congrad's on getting ALL three of your verses through round 1 of the sites International Contest! Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congrats janette on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
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Date: 2/5/2011 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations Janette on "She's Leaving" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on the selection. A really well told story with just enough passion. Dave
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:55:00 PM
Congrats Janette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope all is going well for u this new year .. miss u on site..luv..
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:18:00 AM
Jannette, Thank you for reading some of my work, I think this touches me deeply, well done.....Makes me see the light and hope. As Always, Shar
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:27:00 AM
Lovely rhyme Janette, sometimes decisions have to be made >> James
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Date: 8/23/2010 7:44:00 AM
Very passionate and sad, Janette. Really enjoyed your poem:) Emily
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today and will also read more of you. Have a great day.:) ps, hope you don't think I went to far with my latest.
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:26:00 AM
So much emotion in this write. Wanting true love but was caught in a life that she no longer wanted. Loved it. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:44:00 PM
A very powerful write on lost love and the yearning for a true love
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:38:00 PM
Lovely emotional sentiments Janette.. such a creative write and enjoyable read today.. hope all is well with u.. with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:09:00 AM
absolutely loved it, (reminds me of one I wrote 30 years ago),
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