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She's Just Gone

She's just gone, as fog dissopates, in the morning sun, as a fleetng rainbow disappears beyond the distant horizon. She never said a word, mute to any question, I dared to ask. So I let her leave in silence, only in the aftermath did I finally place emotions once again to the page, silently screaming, hoping she'll hear, hoping she'll understand, hoping she'll come back, as a beautiful purple flower, blooming in the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/19/2011 10:37:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Ian.
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