Edward Orozco Poet Free verse

Shes Gone

Will this heart of mine ever stop beating, oh i plea to my God for the pain is great
I recall the days of joy, her beautiful eyes stared at me, and I fell deeper in love
We held hands against all, the winds bowed down to our unity
Yet today she no longer is in my scene, God where is she
I love her more and more each day
A new passion arises, and i cant even stand to grip the coming end
If it is your will, one day I shall have her back in my keep
I miss holding her, I miss kissing her day after day
I miss her voice, her laugh, will death not take me for she no longer is in my life
Walking into the unknown some say they are to find a new direction
Please come forth, dont stay away anymore I miss you
Those memories will never die, what I feel for you is eternal see you not?
What am I to do now? Forgive me I never meant to hurt you
Please forgive my tounge, I cant do this without you please come back

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Lynette Chachere May 24, 2010 at 9:23 PM your heart calles out to her so longingly in your write to her alone. she sounds like an angel with just the way you portray her.. -Always&Forever Lynette

Michael J. Falotico May 20, 2010 at 12:09 PM Good write my friend.. like the way you word things.. and thanks fro stopping by to read mine

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2010 at 3:12 AM A wonderful poem but so sad Edward. I hope she is back soon. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2010 at 2:06 PM Edward, you are a very good poet, amazing and deep,..p.d.

Dakarai Cobb May 19, 2010 at 12:53 PM i loved the emotion in this poem. i also loved the flow of it. you grabbed my attention with the first line and never let go. great job. looking forward to reading more.

Ralph Taylor May 19, 2010 at 12:30 PM So sad, unhappy, and miserable circumstance. Excellently scripted. Great job, Ed. Keep em comin. Rgds Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2010 at 12:22 PM Oh, Edward, your pain and longing are soulfully expressed in this poem. I do hope she returns and you are blessed with a new start. Why don't you show her your poem? Love, Carolyn