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She's Exceptional

You seem smart, you look special, You are unique, you are beautiful! For the first time I am impressed, For the first time I got influenced. I could conceal my affection When you left for a new destination, But not the void you occupied. Oh boy! I wish you realized! I enjoyed each moment together; Sharing problems, aiding one another, Staring at your smiles rich in vivacity. A clear sign was all I fancy. I am writing this rhyme, With a tear doping on each line, For the first time, I cried, For the first time, I'm relieved. From the radiance of the thought Through the deep veins of the heart, I grant you my honest composition As an enduring story of my affection.

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Date: 10/31/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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