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She's Becoming Unraveled

pink and pale skein of face her twine S p i n N I n G she’s becoming u n r a v e l e d spurious colors DEFEAT fingers fretting the frenetic needles !!!!!!burning!!!!!!! all day all night picking UP stitches some f a l l she’s becoming U N R A v e l E D ladders going d o w N never up running /\ / \ \\ /\ out of yarn
hang i n G \O/ /\
by a spider web
(((((cocooned)))))))
once again no way out of her
((s e)))) k (((((A t))) (((((((((S i)))) ((m mistakes
6/29/2017 free verse

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Date: 6/30/2017 9:57:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2017 10:38:00 AM
You are so kind, Funom! Youmake me smile.
Date: 6/29/2017 6:37:00 PM
Great piece Kim, clever, creative and interesting, really like this, :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thanks, Roy!
Date: 6/29/2017 11:28:00 AM
This was definitely creative. The title made me think of the Guess Who song, "She's come undone" Nice one Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Chris!

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