Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

She's Becoming Unraveled

pink and pale skein of face
her twine 

        S
   p
i
      n
N
     I
n
        G

              she’s becoming

u n r a v e l e d

spurious colors DEFEAT
fingers fretting
the frenetic needles 

!!!!!!burning!!!!!!!

all day
              all night

picking UP stitches

some f
            a
                l
                  l
she’s becoming     U N R A v e l E D

ladders going d
                          o
                              w
                                   N
never up
running /\ / \ \\  /\ out of yarn

hang
i
n
G
\O/
/\
by a spider web

(((((cocooned)))))))

once again

no way out
of her

((s
e))))
k
(((((A
t)))
(((((((((S
i))))
((m

mistakes

6/29/2017
free verse

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Funom Makama June 30, 2017 at 9:57 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2017 at 10:38 AM You are so kind, Funom! Youmake me smile.

Roy Pett June 29, 2017 at 6:37 PM Great piece Kim, clever, creative and interesting, really like this, :)) Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2017 at 6:52 PM Thanks, Roy!

Chris Green June 29, 2017 at 11:28 AM This was definitely creative. The title made me think of the Guess Who song, "She's come undone" Nice one Kim Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2017 at 1:23 PM Thanks, Chris!