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She's Alone

She wakes up alone It's too early but she has no choice She needs to be strong She used to carry the weight of the whole world on her own And yet she doesn't believe That someone's able to save her, to help her She used to believe, that every dream would come true People say it's reverie That she would never achieve something new It's hard to accept She fell 7 times, there's no chance for the 8th She struggles with issues, some things that she hates Everything's going wrong Everything is blowing up There is nobody here Who would say her cheer up She has seen the world Always being on her own She wants to find home She lives in a dream She builds a lot of castles in the air Angel with no wings She's still the kindest, but nobody cares Remember the rule: None but the brave deserve the fair They tried to reason with her and lay bare about world and rules which are there That she can't handle with playing first chair She has seen the world Always been on her own She needs to find home She dreams to find home

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Date: 7/30/2017 2:33:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, some people say that girls are coward, but I don t agree with them, women are the most bravest human being, I believe it because i ve seen my mother doing work which was supposed to be the father s, going out,dealing, making money, as well as the housework, gping out at 2 am just because we needed something, she s truly a hero for me and I salute her, your poem is really good, can you read my poem I ve brought the permission from the God to love you,
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 9/11/2017 2:49:00 AM
Hi Faraz, You are completely right. Woman is the strongest human being.They feel how to survive.
Date: 7/26/2017 4:46:00 PM
Very insightful piece. It shows your pain and scars. You are the fair that only the brave deserve.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 9/11/2017 2:50:00 AM
Thank you. I fall in love with that quote. It's so powerful, soulful and vivid.

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