She's a Real Dream Come True

Who she is I do not know,
but one day I know she'll make her show,
spreading life's loving light
throughout my world,
which will naturally put this
man's mind in a swirl!
With a graceful fan of her delicate hand
a new view of life I will understand.
From the sensuous smile on her lovely face
the beats of my heart 
will continue to race!

Now though I know not exactly
who she is,
there is one thing I know
and that thing is this-
I know she's an angel,
in my dreams she's so real!
I can't begin to tell you
exactly how I feel!
Have you ever dreamt about
who's just right for you?-
then you know what my heart is going through!
When I'm up, about, and wide awake
this feeling of dreaming I just can't shake!

If you've been in love then you know what I mean,
I mean.....this Woman is truly a dream!!!
She takes me to places I never knew exist-
Yes......I'm a man in a dream world of bliss!
Again, have you ever dreamt about 
who's just right for you?-
I want to keep dreaming and never awake too!
I want to stay with her and never come back-
reality's unreal......in it she I do lack!

She's a real dream come true-
she comes to me in my dreams!
Tells me she'll come back, 
and we'll rendezvous
to make dreaming a wondrous thing!
She's a real dream come true-
and one thing I know for sure-
'til the day she arrives
and is real to my eyes,
I will dream of her forevermore!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/31/2019 11:01:00 PM
this unknown she is superb dream of YOU and you are wandering there on her path; waiting on the doorsill of DREAM....//// beautiful poem
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Date: 2/26/2016 10:10:00 PM
Wow. Been there. Great read, great rhythm. Then I met her almost 23 years ago. Yes, it was HER, and still is. Dreams do come true...
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 2/27/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thank you Tom! Some dreams seem to be reality... And then in our realities we try to remember the dream! You found her and she found you... Truly a dream come true!!!
Date: 2/24/2016 4:03:00 PM
YES - I have had the dream while awake since a child. The 1st 3 or 4 stanzas of my Valentine Ellips (that you read) are about just this, the 'I know you're out there somewhere' feeling. You did a great job - I enjoyed your poem very much. (Hit the reply button beneath this if you wish to answer this) ... CayCay (trying to help)
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 2/24/2016 7:06:00 PM
CayCay, I read once that all open eyes don't mean someone is awake any more than all closed eyes mean someone's sleeping! Is that the deep, subtle search for a soulmate??? I've wondered this!!!
Date: 2/24/2016 12:21:00 PM
I literally once had a dream like this and it stayed in my mind for quite some time! Never knew who... But the after sensation lingered!
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