She's a Monster

By blood we are connected,
my blood she shed.
Of feeling and heart ache I once felt,
Now betrayal and emptiness is settling in.
Two faced,
A loaded dice.
Intuition you had,
Intervention you need!
I know all there is to know,
lets not forget I am of your blood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 28, 2016 at 1:16 PM
nice to see again, Mind F..skat
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July 27, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Mind Frame, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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July 21, 2014 at 10:38 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mind :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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July 19, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Hi Mind Frame, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:10 PM
oh so deep and so full of hurt. Whatever has transpired I do hope you resolve your differences - life is all to short. Hugs Jan xxx
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July 18, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Hi this is such a deep, powerful write - I love it. Thank you for sharing this poetic gem! Best wishes.
Gibson Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Chircop Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Welcome to poetrysoup!!!So many monsters as such in the world.I wonder if friendly ones exist..Nice start on this site..Enjoy!!
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July 17, 2014 at 5:37 PM
WOW, WOW! I'm related to a monster myself.. Super love it, Mind Frame,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Hyler Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 1:14 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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