Shepherd Boy

I was a shepherd boy standing watch in the hills nigh Bethlehem,
Watching over papa's restless flock of ram, ewe and lamb,
When a star more brilliant than any other was suddenly revealed!
I was overwhelmed with peace as its mellow rays lit the field!

I considered this eerie event with ever-growing alarm,
When angels appeared above announcing, "We mean no harm!
We bring you happy tidings and for all of mankind eternal joy!
This night a King is born!   In a manger lies that little boy!"

I left the flocks and fled to witness this royal event,
To join in praising God for this gift from Heaven sent!
His mama Mary was so pretty - papa Joseph was so proud,
As they knelt in adoration with heads reverently bowed!

Three majestic seers gave gifts of frankincense, myrrh and gold.
I was humbled as all I could give was a lamb from papa's fold.
This King never wore purple robes or jeweled diadems.
He too became a Shepherd seeking lost and straying lambs!

I heard later that He was an itinerant preacher in Galilee,
Performing all kinds of miracles!  He even walked upon the sea!
I was also told that He was mercilessly nailed to a tree.
Something about the redemption of sins for such as you and me!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Wesley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 5:35 PM
So versatile you are with story telling. But they are always full of meaning. So special Bob. :)
Babcock Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 4:51 PM
The birth of Christ told in your own way. BEAUTIFUL. love phyl
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November 29, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Oh, if only we could have witnessed Christ's birth firsthand, Bob. This is such a lovely story of the first Christmas. I'm sure the gift of the "lamb" was very special and appreciated. Thank you for this spiritually uplifting write! I hope you'll check out my Christmas Miracle contest. Peace and blessings to you, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Pettit Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 2:13 PM
You did a better job than St. Matthew describing the birth of Jesus. Excellent descriptiveness and rhyming here.
Culverhouse Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Prayerfully felt!! great reminder of what is important!!
Onclaud Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:49 PM
oh my.. such a graceful piece.. robert, so nice of you to do something dreamy other that your usual, wity satires.. i like!.:) huggs!
A   Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 8:28 PM
BOB, always a pleasure to stop by..Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.
Squyres Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 7:44 PM
An inspiring story poem...Enjoyed !!!
Yakubu Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Robert drawing the season with words, i also read that this your shepherd born is God and now in the right hand of God the Father. Hallelujah. Nice reading your piece. Peace and happy season
Maverick Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Amen to this write Bob..!
Austin Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Great inspirational, seasonal write. Love, daver
Lane Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Well done Bob. I'm taking a crack at the story for tomorrow.
Neels Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Bob, you have me smiling with this.. Told the story so beautifully.. Awesome title as well. Blessings to you ;) Wilma
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