Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Shells

Encaged in eggshells,
Mother bird covers, sends warmth,
New life comes to world !

Life encased in shells,
Armoured subtle beings ,
Frail alluring sail !

Flashing demure smile,
Yielded with coy submission,
Come out of your shell !


Written on 6/8/14
Theme- Shells
Contest- Leaf, feather, shell or flake
Sponsor - Andrea Dietrich

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Shadow Hamilton August 6, 2014 at 7:16 PM lovely haiku Dr Upma check 2nd stanza last line do you mean snail or sail? gl in contest and ty for visiting my page hugs Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 10:01 PM Thnx Shadow! I mean sail ,, but then I feel snail wud fit better,, let me ponder !!

Paul Callus August 6, 2014 at 5:16 PM This is an intriguing lovely set of haiku, Upma...but I have a favourite....the last one:) gl in the contest. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 10:02 PM Thnx Paul ! Ur Lovely comments always encourage,, third one is my fav too!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 6, 2014 at 9:39 AM Amazing write on the animal world, Dr. Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 9:40 AM Thnx Dr Ram !

Pandita Sietesantos August 6, 2014 at 9:15 AM Wonderful Haiku with amazing imagery, Dr. Upma! This looks like a winner to me, my friend! Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 9:16 AM Thnx Pandita !

Anne-Lise Andresen August 6, 2014 at 8:23 AM - If I had to choose one .... I choose number three - They are beautiful all 3! - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 9:17 AM Thnx Anne Lise! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Eileen Manassian August 6, 2014 at 7:55 AM Awwwwww.....pretty pretty pretty! LOVED this one, Dr Upma. Good luck on contest...Sometimes I just want to crawl in a shell. Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 6, 2014 at 9:18 AM Thnx Eileen ! I just love to see those crawling ones on seashore!