Shedding Whites

night shed white from sky
colours faded, sun succoured -
greenish tint is back



Won second place in A Nature Themed Haiku With Color Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Hello Jenish Somadas, a beautiful picture you created with your words and scene. Have a nice day my friend.
Somadas Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Darlene..
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Beautiful imagery and I love the picture you used:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Thank you Jan for your time and comment..
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:08 PM
very nice, Jenish. You did GREAT in the contest. Congratulations.
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 9:02 PM
Thank you Andrea for your support and inspiration..
Callus Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Jenish. A striking three-liner. Regards // paul
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Paul for your delightful words..
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:35 AM
- Congratulations on your great white nature themed haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Anne for your kind words..
Kauffman Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:10 AM
Congrats Jenish. Really nice haiku.
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Thank you Sam for your kind words..
Messina Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Beautiful haiku, Jenish. Congrats on your win!
Somadas Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Thank you Charles..Your always delighted..
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, the image is lovely too!
Somadas Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Thank you for sponsoring such a wonderful contest and thanks for the placement..I'm honoured..
Krutsinger Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 11:51 AM
This enhances the photo.
Somadas Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Wow..That is a big praise..Thank you..
Neumann Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:11 AM
Nice one. Good luck for the contest ...
Somadas Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Thank you Kai..
Adams Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 3:00 PM
you painted the scene so vividly... beautiful haiku... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
Somadas Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you Sandra..Imagination only..Never seen a snow fall in real..
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 9:48 AM
I think this will do well. You painted it perfectly. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit.
Somadas Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Thank you Richard for your kind words..
Roy Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Very well written. Liked it. God bless you.
Somadas Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Pratap for your kind comment..
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Awesome projection, of colour..
Somadas Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:01 AM
Thank you Harry..
Trifiatis Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:38 AM
Beautiful imagery dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx
Somadas Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:41 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. As usual comment is a delight to read..
Deo Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:22 AM
great colo(u)ring Jenish. Thanx
Somadas Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Anil..
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