Shedding Whites

night shed white from sky
colours faded, sun succoured -
greenish tint is back



Won second place in A Nature Themed Haiku With Color Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 2/5/2020 9:32:00 AM
Hello Jenish Somadas, a beautiful picture you created with your words and scene. Have a nice day my friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/5/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Darlene..
Date: 1/29/2020 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and I love the picture you used:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan for your time and comment..
Date: 1/29/2020 3:08:00 PM
very nice, Jenish. You did GREAT in the contest. Congratulations.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 9:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your support and inspiration..
Date: 1/29/2020 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Jenish. A striking three-liner. Regards // paul
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Paul for your delightful words..
Date: 1/29/2020 3:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great white nature themed haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne for your kind words..
Date: 1/29/2020 1:10:00 AM
Congrats Jenish. Really nice haiku.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/29/2020 1:25:00 AM
Thank you Sam for your kind words..
Date: 1/28/2020 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Jenish. Congrats on your win!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/28/2020 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Charles..Your always delighted..
Date: 1/28/2020 5:35:00 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, the image is lovely too!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/28/2020 9:14:00 PM
Thank you for sponsoring such a wonderful contest and thanks for the placement..I'm honoured..
Date: 1/27/2020 11:51:00 AM
This enhances the photo.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/27/2020 12:27:00 PM
Wow..That is a big praise..Thank you..
Date: 1/27/2020 5:11:00 AM
Nice one. Good luck for the contest ...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/27/2020 5:33:00 AM
Thank you Kai..
Date: 1/26/2020 3:00:00 PM
you painted the scene so vividly... beautiful haiku... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 9:10:00 PM
Thank you Sandra..Imagination only..Never seen a snow fall in real..
Date: 1/26/2020 9:48:00 AM
I think this will do well. You painted it perfectly. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Richard for your kind words..
Date: 1/25/2020 5:47:00 AM
Very well written. Liked it. God bless you.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/25/2020 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Pratap for your kind comment..
Date: 1/25/2020 1:30:00 AM
Awesome projection, of colour..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/25/2020 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Harry..
Date: 1/24/2020 6:38:00 AM
Beautiful imagery dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/24/2020 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.. As usual comment is a delight to read..
Date: 1/24/2020 6:22:00 AM
great colo(u)ring Jenish. Thanx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/24/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Anil..
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