Shedding a Tear For Him

I cannot help but feel this pain
For a man that I once knew
Now as I see him once again
My words I find are few

Separated years ago
Through fateful circumstance
Life's been a hard row to hoe
But here's another chance

To tell this man I love him
As a single tear cascades
It shows a love that will not dim
A feeling that never fades

A tear that belies all I've said
In anger through the years
The stories that were in my head
My resentment and fears

Now for this man I hardly knew
I stand here and I weep
I wish him a loving adieu
In his eternal sleep

He looks serene just lying there
Although it makes me sad
My teardrops show how much I care
As I say"good-bye Dad"



By Deb Wilson
for contest"Personify A Tear"
sponsored by HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Deb. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations to you on your win Deb ;)
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April 22, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Great to see you in the winner's list, Deb. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Congrats Deb on your well deserved win in the contest---kash
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April 22, 2011 at 4:42 AM
Congrats Deb on your super win in HG's contest on tears with another magnificent write from your creative pen luv.. enjoy your sweet success ...
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contetst, Deb
Esquire Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Dear Deb. Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 12th Place Win LOVE, YOUR Liege, ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG
Johnson Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Sorry about the sadness Deb. LThis is a touching tale. Love, Joyce
Monaghan Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Very good this isn't my wife's Aunt Debbie is it? She recently lost her father.
Onclaud Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 12:02 PM
i remember my dad who passed on at such a young age, deb.. how this poignant, expressive work touches me no end.. winning wishes to you! :) hugggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Sad, touchy and moving write on the personification of a tear, Deb and a nice tribute to your Dad,
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