Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Monoku

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        ~ so heavenly beautiful ~ I don't like it ~ makes my poems fade ~










04/01/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Who Flips your Trolley Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May
Monoku : 16 syllables
2nd place in the contest

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Mystic Rose Rose June 5, 2020 at 8:58 PM Your poetry can never fade very far dear heart xo

Charles Messina January 27, 2020 at 8:16 AM Great take on the contest, Anne-Lise. Many congrats on your win! hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 8:26 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann January 27, 2020 at 5:25 AM They will never fade, because they are written from the heart ... Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 6:13 AM - Thank you very much, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France January 26, 2020 at 11:07 PM Anne-Lise, beautiful, congratulations on your win _Constance Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 6:12 AM - Many thanks Constanse, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2020 at 3:39 PM Nobody here makes our poems fade, Anne Lise. By your participation here alone, you are famous and by your poems, you will always be remembered. I really like the humbleness in your one-liner. Congrats on the win. Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 6:12 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy January 26, 2020 at 1:04 PM Good one, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 6:11 AM - Many thanks Janice, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams January 26, 2020 at 8:10 AM back to say congratulations...i loved your original take on the contest... hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2020 at 6:11 AM - Many thanks Sandra, for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2020 at 3:48 AM Hi Anne-Marie my dear friend, this is a unique write and will definately be a win in the contest. Well Penned Sunshine Smile, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2020 at 6:39 AM - Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt January 15, 2020 at 12:08 AM Anne-Lise, I think every writer has another writer so admired and respected that makes us wonder if we should keep picking up our pen. And yet we do! Thanks for the lovely write ~ John Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2020 at 6:39 AM - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas January 13, 2020 at 10:51 PM Cleverly written.. Good luck in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2020 at 6:38 AM - Thank you very much, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 8, 2020 at 2:35 PM I love this entry, Sunshine! I like it more since you didn't mention the poet's name. Best wishes in Bobby's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2020 at 6:37 AM - Thank you very much, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 7, 2020 at 12:27 PM Your poems are wonderful my friend . love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2020 at 12:33 PM - Many thanks Phyllis, for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France January 5, 2020 at 11:24 PM Anne-Lise, I love this, a FAV _ Constance Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2020 at 8:24 AM - Really appreciate your "fave", many thanks Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 5, 2020 at 12:54 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, so why don;t you like it? have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 5, 2020 at 5:43 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, I hope you win the contest. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 1:00 PM - I'm terribly envious, Darlene :))) - .... why aren't my poems more beautiful than hers ... No, dear Darlene ... I'm not envious of anyone ... this is just written for fun and for the contest :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One January 5, 2020 at 8:26 AM I wonder who she is... Soupmail Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 12:53 PM - She's a secret :))) - Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 5, 2020 at 7:38 AM Sandra said it perfect, your poems can't fade....they are wonderful! Best wishes in the contest Anne-Lise. Hugs Charlie Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 12:55 PM - You are good and kind, my friend Charlie :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 9:53 PM "she" could never make your poems fade, because "you" write beautifully my friend...i like this...best wishes in the contest... hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 12:51 PM - Many thanks for the wonderful and sweet comment, my friend Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 4, 2020 at 8:44 PM Lovely monoku Anne...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 12:50 PM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios January 4, 2020 at 5:17 PM Hello~ love this Monoku Panagiota Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2020 at 12:49 PM - Hello ... many thanks for your lovely comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2020 at 2:45 PM Cleverly done, Anne-Lise! All the best. Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 3:23 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 4, 2020 at 12:52 PM Apotheosis of humility dearest, Anne-Lise! Marvelously done! Good luck! Hugs xxx Demetrios Trifiatis January 5, 2020 at 5:43 AM Understood that but still... Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 12:56 PM - There is no "she" that makes me envious ... just for fun and the contest, my friend :) - Many thanks for the wonderful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)