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She Winked At Me

The Great Depression and then the Dust Bowl - I was but a child as these took their toll And as the light went from my mother's eyes Who could understand the wheres and the whys Then followed the war that swallowed the world And re-lit the spark as our flag unfurled Mother worked hard in the teeth of that gale Never thought of loss though the light grew pale Then one day it was over finally My mother squeezed my hand and winked at me She had known it all along, hadn't she Not ever before had she winked at me Then the years fell away till all were done Should have said I was proud to be her son How many words have tumbled from my head But, oh, that sentence that I left unsaid 4-17-19 Contest:What Was Left Unsaid Sponsor:Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/25/2019 3:17:00 PM
This is beautiful, your words and sentiment. I think she knew without you saying a word. She was your mother...she knew. Congratulations on your win with this loving verse.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/26/2019 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!!
Date: 4/25/2019 2:06:00 AM
This poem touches the heart, especially if a mother. You have written it so lovingly to honor her. Somehow I feel she knows Larry. Congratulations on your most deserving First Placement! : )
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/25/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!!
Date: 4/17/2019 5:31:00 PM
So sweet and poignant...and I'm sure any mother would know how you felt just by looking at you, meeting each other eye to eye. Great poem, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/17/2019 10:30:00 PM
Than you, Carole...nicely said! and I appreciate it!!
Date: 4/17/2019 5:15:00 PM
Sadly, we all have things we regret not saying. I do believe that our loved ones know without the words being said. All we can do is learn from our regrets. A fine poem indeed.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/17/2019 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, kindly and I do hope you are right!!

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