She Who Has Captured My Heart

When my lady speaks
People start to dance
Her voice is like a sweet
Melody that breathes 
upon
A bank of violets
She walks as if she is 
modelling
Her smile
Glitters like a lonely star
Oh my babie looks
Mighty fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/23/2016 6:06:00 PM
FUNGAI, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:30:00 AM
Fungai, enjoyed reading your poem today.... **SKAT
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:06:00 PM
a lovely poem for a lovely lady..hope to see more of your poems Fungai...Joseph
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:51:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Fungai. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Fungai Njenga
Date: 5/9/2015 4:52:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/6/2012 4:53:00 AM
That is so adorable you r very lucky to have her
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Fungai Njenga
Date: 5/9/2015 4:53:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/4/2012 1:50:00 PM
Smile ˜ She Sounds Beautiful &, Does Her Beauty Have A Sister Perhaps? Hahaha, You Lucky Man You * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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Fungai Njenga
Date: 5/9/2015 4:53:00 AM
Yes she has hahaha
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