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She Who Dawns

It’s a dot in the sky Or is it … The queen of the heavens The youthful princess On whom shall never descend the Wrinkles of old age Her gait as smooth as feathers on silk And yet so swift The sky is her bed And the heaven her field And yes her robe that quietly Sweeps by And her adornment of the stars And the dress of clouds O beauty, What lies behind thy glittery eyes? Haven’t you been in the dark for long But days of colour and black you have seen But stood quiet for ever so long Now open up my love, my life Now pour out all the wisdom you got And behind the slender body Is the pain of perhaps of being alive Come back in the dark sky you dawn Come back and be the moon of the night sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/19/2014 4:40:00 PM
Hi Sumedha, hoping to see a new one from you again....peace & love....SKAT
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Date: 5/6/2014 2:24:00 PM
Sumedha, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Sumedha Anand
Date: 5/10/2014 2:25:00 AM
Hey SKAT...well, i'm just a crazy 16 year old! Wrote this peom on a beautiful full moon, 2 years back... Thank you for the warm welcome :)
Date: 5/5/2014 1:01:00 PM
This is a fancy poem, Sumedha, I enjoyed the dreamy mood.
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Sumedha Anand
Date: 5/10/2014 2:26:00 AM
Thhnk you!
Date: 5/5/2014 12:24:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sumedha:) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sumedha Anand
Date: 5/10/2014 2:28:00 AM
Thanks Anne!
Date: 5/5/2014 11:15:00 AM
Beautiful free verse poem, Sumedha., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sumedha Anand
Date: 5/10/2014 2:27:00 AM
Thank you...my new peot friend!

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