She Who Dawns

It’s a dot in the sky 
Or is it …
The queen of the heavens 
The youthful princess
On whom shall never descend the 
Wrinkles of old age
Her gait as smooth as feathers on silk
And yet so swift 
The sky is her bed
And the heaven her field
And yes her robe that quietly
Sweeps by 
And her adornment of the stars 
And the dress of clouds 
O beauty,
What lies behind thy glittery eyes?
Haven’t you been in the dark for long
But days of colour and black you have seen 
But stood quiet for ever so long
Now open up my love, my life
Now pour out all the wisdom you got
And behind the slender body
Is the pain of perhaps of being alive 
Come back in the dark sky you dawn
Come back and be the moon of the night sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 19, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Hi Sumedha, hoping to see a new one from you again....peace & love....SKAT
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May 6, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Sumedha, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Anand Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Hey SKAT...well, i'm just a crazy 16 year old! Wrote this peom on a beautiful full moon, 2 years back... Thank you for the warm welcome :)
Sangwai Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:01 PM
This is a fancy poem, Sumedha, I enjoyed the dreamy mood.
Anand Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 2:26 AM
Thhnk you!
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May 5, 2014 at 12:24 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sumedha:) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anand Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thanks Anne!
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May 5, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful free verse poem, Sumedha., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Anand Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thank you...my new peot friend!
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