She Was My Bestfriend

I can't begin to explain 
so can you just imagine the pain 
of the torture to my brain day after day 
I'm enraged going insane 
was never supposed to be this way 
but now I'm here once again 
try to cope but it hurts instead
All I really want is for it all to end 
Fully drained I'm walking dead
Pictures in my head
Wonder if you really did it in my bed
Did you ever love me or was it just pretend 
I'll never really know but she was my best friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/8/2016 1:27:00 PM
DEEP WRITE.... LINDA
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Date: 3/2/2015 6:08:00 PM
Wow had a similar experience i like it boo
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Date: 3/2/2015 2:02:00 AM
Hauntingly sad, said with such candor. A 7. Welcome to Soup, ShnKimMel. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim
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Date: 3/1/2015 12:50:00 PM
Your tears seep out of your words and dampen the emotional fires alive within your verses. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:53:00 PM
I've been there! God saw me through it and sustained me beyond measure. He can, and will, do the same for you if you place your faith and trust in Him.
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:23:00 PM
I am sorry for your pain...betrayl is a hard pill to swollow. There will be tomorrow better than today. There is a saying when you are going through hell, don't stop, keep on going. Thank you for sharing...
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Shnkimmel Clarke
Date: 2/28/2015 7:37:00 PM
Thank you Ed! That's what I'm doing hoping for a better tomorrow!
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