She Walks Through the Door

A brazen chime, did eyes fare grander?
Her inward jazz, knowing--love me now.
O patient, quiet reins
Save tomorrow
Under violet's waltz. 
Xerxes' yelping zenith.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spears Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Congrats Matt on your 2nd place win in the ABC contest with these awesome words... enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Ahmad Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Congrats! :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Those xyz's are a killer! LOL Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 1:15 PM
A most excellent use of the form! Bravo!
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 10:51 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry today Matt. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Wonderful work, Matt!! This isn't easy to do! :)
Pickett Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 8:17 AM
I have yet to attempt this form... I need to.... Good work my friend....:JP]
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 7:20 AM
Don't know how you managed to stick to the ABC form and still give us such a beautiful, meaningful poem, Matt. Well done! Best Wishes, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 6:17 AM
So you like how she walks ;)! Thanks for the comment on Unrequited my verse I DID want the word sounds in the opposite order I have chnaged them and so appreciate your critical eye! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Terrific ABC format Matt ..good luck if your entry for the new contest.. exciting words used... to convey power packed emotion.. enjoyed .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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