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She Walks Through the Door

A brazen chime, did eyes fare grander? Her inward jazz, knowing--love me now. O patient, quiet reins Save tomorrow Under violet's waltz. Xerxes' yelping zenith.

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Laura Spears

Date: 5/27/2010 6:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 5:01:00 PM

Congrats Matt on your 2nd place win in the ABC contest with these awesome words... enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/26/2010 12:21:00 PM

Congrats! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/14/2010 5:25:00 PM

Those xyz's are a killer! LOL Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2010 1:15:00 PM

A most excellent use of the form! Bravo!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2010 10:51:00 AM

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry today Matt. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/25/2010 8:23:00 AM

Wonderful work, Matt!! This isn't easy to do! :)

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/25/2010 8:17:00 AM

I have yet to attempt this form... I need to.... Good work my friend....:JP]

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2010 7:20:00 AM

Don't know how you managed to stick to the ABC form and still give us such a beautiful, meaningful poem, Matt. Well done! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/25/2010 6:17:00 AM

So you like how she walks ;)! Thanks for the comment on Unrequited my verse I DID want the word sounds in the opposite order I have chnaged them and so appreciate your critical eye! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 5:54:00 AM

Terrific ABC format Matt ..good luck if your entry for the new contest.. exciting words used... to convey power packed emotion.. enjoyed .. luv.. "Sweetheart"