She Walks In Silence

She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.

Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.

She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze
fervent rising prayers brought her to her knees
seeking the blessings of grace, peace and love
if only her pain she could rise above.
Nameless beauty would dissolve in her womb
Her wounds.. sins she  would carry to her tomb.

Inspired by  “She Walks In Beauty”   Lord Byron (George Gordon)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ray Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Lord Byron is pleased and no more need be said....
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Oh! How pleased I am by your kindness and unique feedback, Timothy! The honour is truly mine! My deepest regards and blessings.
Juman Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 9:42 PM
indeed this was very nicely written
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and the beauty of your feedback, Al. My deepest regards and blessings.
Poet Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 11:05 AM
A great poem! I like the rhyme, and the sentences flow smoothly. Nameless beauty would dissolve in her womb. Her wounds.. sins she would carry to her tomb. You deserve all encouragement, sister Besma. Good luck.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 7:59 AM
I highly appreciate your generous and wonderful compliment, Lasaad! Thank you so much for your honouring visit and uplifting words.. My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Wow ~ beautiful poem, Besma. So beautiful ~ glad it is published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Dear Line, thank you so much for being here to share with me your beautiful words and warm appreciation on my humble poem.. and I'm deeply honoured, humbled, grateful and blessed to have this very poem, which I highly appreciate and cherish, published in PS Anthology.. and be among so beautiful and great poets and poetesses whom you are one of the greatest and highly talented.. I hope you are doing well and enjoying your time. Stay safe and happy in this pandemic rough time.. my warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Castellenas Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 3:08 AM
I liked the honest thoughts and the internal life showed in the words. Most of us. Hold silence to thing done. No honor in raising old sin or mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 9:29 AM
I liked so much your insightful comment and appreciative words, John.. thank you so much for so honouring a visit! and I highly value your feedback! My deepest regards and blessings.
Afridi Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 10:22 AM
Excellent poem! I like the rhyming and the sentences flow nicely.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 3:54 AM
Thank you so much, Rukhsana for reading and appreciating my humble work.. my honour and great delight. Regards and blessings.
Herrick Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 8:05 PM
To me this speaks of a woman raped and she decides to keep the baby, but the baby dies in her womb. She is left alone. Whatever the case, well written and may love cure all, when time is no more.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 4:47 AM
So pleased my humble work touched your soul! Thank you so much, Jude, for reading and appreciating my poetry.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Foster Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 4:19 PM
A sad, but lovely piece. "prayers brought her to her knees". I would send my sister, every flower and tell her all she is worth... daisies, roses, and tiny yellow bells... beautiful. Ann
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 2:01 PM
You have a beautiful and huge heart, dear Ann! Your kind words reach the chambers of my heart! Thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.
Lindley Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:27 PM
My dear friend, please excuse me my having missed this pure and exquisite gem! You have done Lord Byron proud with this exceptionally inspired beauty! Somehow my having been ill I missed this wonderful and magnificent poem! A fav-- a truly brilliant example pf your great poetic prowess.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 1:09 AM
I have missed giving due respect and gratitude to you dear Robert for your graceful presence on my page to elevate and uplift my humble work! Thank you so much for your kindness, generosity and humility.. my honour and pleasure.. warmest wishes. God bless you.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Brilliantly versed poem, Besma! Kudos on POTD. Very pulse affecting prose ... Untraceable are the paths to no end unable to soul unself and ascend. GrEaT poetry! Love and joy always.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 8:49 AM
I'm grateful to you, Freddie, for your precious time you devoted to read and appreciate my humble poetry.. thank you so much. My honour and pleasure. Best regards and Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Hello Besma, this is a beautiful written poem. Yes her womb sins she would carry to her tomb. have a nice evening my friend.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much dear Darlene for your lovely presence and appreciative comment.. My pleasure. God bless you.
Kiser Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 5:11 AM
I like this: "The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone the clutches of mind hurting to the bone. Untraceable are the paths to no end unable to soul unself and ascend." Very spiritual and inspiring; this verse describes the agony she is going through, quite well; beautiful imagery.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 9:16 AM
I'm deeply humbled and honoured by your genuine and generous appreciation.. I'm glad my humble words touched your poetic heart and soul.. thank you so much M. L. Kiser for taking precious a time to read and appreciate my work. I am grateful. My deepest regards. Blessings.
Proxenos Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:10 AM
Hi Besma, Again you produce a gem of a poem, a mystical write which flows and glides between heaven and earth. Each of your poems are a blessing to us soupers. May 2019 bring forward a bounty of your inspirational poems dearest soul sister. All my love, Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Soul sister and dearest Jennifer, how sweet of you to shower upon my humble poetry and soul your lovely and kind words of praise and appreciation.. you honour me! Your comment is rewarding! Bunches of hearty thanks dearest. Love and hugs.
Proxenos Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:12 AM
not forgetting to send congratulations as well as poetry hugs to you dear Besma.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Wow I just got to know. This was selected for poem honour of the day! Congrats and well deserved. Enjoy your poetic limelight acknowledgement friend.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:41 AM
My honour and pleasure dear Zaynab! Your gracious presence and your praising feedback are highly valued. I'm deeply humbled. Thank you so much. Be blessed always.
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 6:59 AM
I have returned to this post and once more partake of its beauty, Besma. Pls check out soupmail. Warm regards // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Always an honour and a great pleasure to see you on my page Paul.. thank you so much for your kind words and constructive remarks.. warmest wishes and Merry Christmas.
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 3:24 AM
Wow wow wow wow, I am humbled, this is one of the best poems I have read here, this a fav, what wonderful poetry!!!!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 2:40 PM
What a wonderful comment Arthur! It is thanks to such uplifting and rewarding feedbacks that my humble poetry can ascend the ladder of aspired beauty! I'm deeply honoured and grateful.. God bless you.
Onclaud Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 2:19 AM
definitely a POTD, dear bes!... have a diwali kind of christmas...huggs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Merry Christmas dear nette ! a warm heart.. a soul of a poetess spreading love and kindness into my heart.. thank you so much. God bless you.
Ajmal Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Such a wonderful poem it is, simply brilliant, a masterpiece and certainly a favorite for me, I guess that I am late but I hope that it isn't too late to Congrats you, so many congratulations on your poem being chosen as the POTD, good luck and have a really nice day
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Never late to honour my humble poem dear Faraz.. It is my great pleasure to see you on my page with your exhaustive and rewarding feedback.. thank you so much. Be blessed always.
One Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Absolutely fantastic poem, from a very talented poetess... Some sins will never go away, yet only God can judge... Also congrats on a fully deserving POTD..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Wonderful and uplifting is your comment Silent One.. always grateful to you for your generosity and continuous support to my humble poetry.. My deepest regards.. Stay blessed always.
Theraven Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Beauty lies within the minds and hearts and souls of the dearest. Thank you Besma, for breaking the silence. -Richard
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:39 PM
As I am reading your feedback, a beauty of the mind is unveiled! Thank you so much, Richard, for granting me the pleasure and honour of your visit.. My deepest regards.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:42 PM
Wow chastity and purity are rare great qualities and this wonderful poem is so bright and impressive to me. Some gems are meant to be hidden and available to only one. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do check out my newest poem too. The way to greet each other as poets neh
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much Zaynab for your honourable visit and appreciative feedback.. a great elation to read your appreciative feedback.. God bless you.
Nicole Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 7:05 PM
"She Walks In Beauty" Yes, indeed. And you are such beauty Besma. Because of the love within your heart. Your thoughts hold so many emotions, and every moment wraps softly around me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 3:26 PM
You write in Beauty dear Brandy! Every single word ripples through my heart.. gracious is your visit.. very wholehearted is your comment.. my delight and honour.. thank you so much.. stay blessed always.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Byron is my favorite masterpoet Besma. This poem is beyond beautiful! It has a divine glow! Your lovely poem inspires me. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! Happy holidays my friend! : ) xxoo
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Indeed, we get inspired by poets of grandeur! Their masterpieces are pearls adorning the world of poetry.. Beauties to behold, cherish and get inspired by.. thank you so much Connie for your lovely visit and beautiful feedback.. Warmest wishes. Merry Christmas.
Black Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 12:59 PM
A beautiful eloquent retheme; a word puzzle fitting like a fine tailored suit and most of all to read such an intimate confessional about the most intimate madding ambiguity of sorting out the sacred from the profane I love the quandary.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 5:04 PM
What a great feedback! You genuinely dived into my very poem and words.. you touched the very essence of my poem substance! Honoured to have you on my page reading and writing one of the finest comments! You do honour my humble write Crimson! Thank you so much. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
May Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 12:37 PM
That is beautiful Besma, Congratulations on POTD
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 4:57 PM
A beautiful feedback Bobby.. thank you so much for valuing my humble work.. Best regards.
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