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She Walks In Silence

She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.

Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.

She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze
fervent rising prayers brought her to her knees
seeking the blessings of grace, peace and love
if only her pain she could rise above.
Nameless beauty would dissolve in her womb
Her wounds.. sins she  would carry to her tomb.

Inspired by  “She Walks In Beauty”   Lord Byron (George Gordon)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/27/2019 8:27:00 PM
My dear friend, please excuse me my having missed this pure and exquisite gem! You have done Lord Byron proud with this exceptionally inspired beauty! Somehow my having been ill I missed this wonderful and magnificent poem! A fav-- a truly brilliant example pf your great poetic prowess.
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Date: 1/17/2019 12:05:00 PM
Brilliantly versed poem, Besma! Kudos on POTD. Very pulse affecting prose ... Untraceable are the paths to no end unable to soul unself and ascend. GrEaT poetry! Love and joy always.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/21/2019 8:49:00 AM
I'm grateful to you, Freddie, for your precious time you devoted to read and appreciate my humble poetry.. thank you so much. My honour and pleasure. Best regards and Blessings.
Date: 1/8/2019 7:54:00 PM
Hello Besma, this is a beautiful written poem. Yes her womb sins she would carry to her tomb. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2019 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Darlene for your lovely presence and appreciative comment.. My pleasure. God bless you.
Date: 1/5/2019 5:11:00 AM
I like this: "The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone the clutches of mind hurting to the bone. Untraceable are the paths to no end unable to soul unself and ascend." Very spiritual and inspiring; this verse describes the agony she is going through, quite well; beautiful imagery.
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Date: 1/6/2019 9:16:00 AM
I'm deeply humbled and honoured by your genuine and generous appreciation.. I'm glad my humble words touched your poetic heart and soul.. thank you so much M. L. Kiser for taking precious a time to read and appreciate my work. I am grateful. My deepest regards. Blessings.
Date: 12/26/2018 3:10:00 AM
Hi Besma, Again you produce a gem of a poem, a mystical write which flows and glides between heaven and earth. Each of your poems are a blessing to us soupers. May 2019 bring forward a bounty of your inspirational poems dearest soul sister. All my love, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/26/2018 9:45:00 AM
Soul sister and dearest Jennifer, how sweet of you to shower upon my humble poetry and soul your lovely and kind words of praise and appreciation.. you honour me! Your comment is rewarding! Bunches of hearty thanks dearest. Love and hugs.
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Date: 12/26/2018 3:12:00 AM
not forgetting to send congratulations as well as poetry hugs to you dear Besma.
Date: 12/26/2018 1:28:00 AM
Wow I just got to know. This was selected for poem honour of the day! Congrats and well deserved. Enjoy your poetic limelight acknowledgement friend.
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Date: 12/26/2018 9:41:00 AM
My honour and pleasure dear Zaynab! Your gracious presence and your praising feedback are highly valued. I'm deeply humbled. Thank you so much. Be blessed always.
Date: 12/23/2018 6:59:00 AM
I have returned to this post and once more partake of its beauty, Besma. Pls check out soupmail. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:45:00 PM
Always an honour and a great pleasure to see you on my page Paul.. thank you so much for your kind words and constructive remarks.. warmest wishes and Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/23/2018 3:24:00 AM
Wow wow wow wow, I am humbled, this is one of the best poems I have read here, this a fav, what wonderful poetry!!!!
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:40:00 PM
What a wonderful comment Arthur! It is thanks to such uplifting and rewarding feedbacks that my humble poetry can ascend the ladder of aspired beauty! I'm deeply honoured and grateful.. God bless you.
Date: 12/23/2018 2:19:00 AM
definitely a POTD, dear bes!... have a diwali kind of christmas...huggs
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:23:00 PM
Merry Christmas dear nette ! a warm heart.. a soul of a poetess spreading love and kindness into my heart.. thank you so much. God bless you.
Date: 12/22/2018 12:19:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem it is, simply brilliant, a masterpiece and certainly a favorite for me, I guess that I am late but I hope that it isn't too late to Congrats you, so many congratulations on your poem being chosen as the POTD, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:48:00 PM
Never late to honour my humble poem dear Faraz.. It is my great pleasure to see you on my page with your exhaustive and rewarding feedback.. thank you so much. Be blessed always.
Date: 12/22/2018 10:23:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic poem, from a very talented poetess... Some sins will never go away, yet only God can judge... Also congrats on a fully deserving POTD..
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful and uplifting is your comment Silent One.. always grateful to you for your generosity and continuous support to my humble poetry.. My deepest regards.. Stay blessed always.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:57:00 PM
Beauty lies within the minds and hearts and souls of the dearest. Thank you Besma, for breaking the silence. -Richard
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:39:00 PM
As I am reading your feedback, a beauty of the mind is unveiled! Thank you so much, Richard, for granting me the pleasure and honour of your visit.. My deepest regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:42:00 PM
Wow chastity and purity are rare great qualities and this wonderful poem is so bright and impressive to me. Some gems are meant to be hidden and available to only one. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do check out my newest poem too. The way to greet each other as poets neh
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Zaynab for your honourable visit and appreciative feedback.. a great elation to read your appreciative feedback.. God bless you.
Date: 12/21/2018 7:05:00 PM
"She Walks In Beauty" Yes, indeed. And you are such beauty Besma. Because of the love within your heart. Your thoughts hold so many emotions, and every moment wraps softly around me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/22/2018 3:26:00 PM
You write in Beauty dear Brandy! Every single word ripples through my heart.. gracious is your visit.. very wholehearted is your comment.. my delight and honour.. thank you so much.. stay blessed always.
Date: 12/21/2018 2:25:00 PM
Byron is my favorite masterpoet Besma. This poem is beyond beautiful! It has a divine glow! Your lovely poem inspires me. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! Happy holidays my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2018 5:13:00 PM
Indeed, we get inspired by poets of grandeur! Their masterpieces are pearls adorning the world of poetry.. Beauties to behold, cherish and get inspired by.. thank you so much Connie for your lovely visit and beautiful feedback.. Warmest wishes. Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/21/2018 12:59:00 PM
A beautiful eloquent retheme; a word puzzle fitting like a fine tailored suit and most of all to read such an intimate confessional about the most intimate madding ambiguity of sorting out the sacred from the profane I love the quandary.
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Date: 12/21/2018 5:04:00 PM
What a great feedback! You genuinely dived into my very poem and words.. you touched the very essence of my poem substance! Honoured to have you on my page reading and writing one of the finest comments! You do honour my humble write Crimson! Thank you so much. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
Date: 12/21/2018 12:37:00 PM
That is beautiful Besma, Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:57:00 PM
A beautiful feedback Bobby.. thank you so much for valuing my humble work.. Best regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:41:00 AM
The deep beauty, spirit and vivid imagery of your captivating poem leaves your ardent reader awe-inspired, my dearest friend. I'm left breathless as I read each glorious line of graceful verse, each more breathtaking that the last.. your poetic gem shines with an ethereal quality that only your inspired soul can so splendidly pen. She walks in silence and into my heart, dear Besma.. a FAV! Pure poetry to be relished again and again. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes, love and hugs, my lovely sister and friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:55:00 PM
Breathtaking is your warm feedback.. glorious are your very words of beauty.. your heartfelt and poetic feedback is inspiring! An ardent reader of higher quality and refinement as you are dearest Susan and soul sister you give credit to my humble poetry.. you decrypt all the possibilities of my humble words and amaze with the beauty of your feedback.. warmest wishes.. love and hugs..
Date: 12/21/2018 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Besma. Well done
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Warren for your honourable visit and appreciating comment. My deepest regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:02:00 AM
"Unable to soul unself and ascend". Hmmm. I'm not sure what that means but it sounds very cool. It definitely has a feel like She Walks In Beauty Like The Night.
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:43:00 PM
Unable to unself the self and ascend to attain divine grace and beauty.. "She Walks In Beauty" a masterpiece that captivated my soul and gripped my heart.. I'm glad Mark you enjoyed reading and appreciating.. thank you so much for rewarding my humble poem. Best regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 10:26:00 AM
Very well rendered Besma..Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:27:00 PM
I'm glad you liked and valued my humble poem.. I am deeply grateful and elated Joseph.. My deepest regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 9:56:00 AM
A beautiful poem Besma. Congratulations on your POTD!!!
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike for your honourable visit and lovely feedback.. My pleasure and delight.. Best regards.
Date: 12/21/2018 9:37:00 AM
Besides being beautifully written, this is so very insightful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:18:00 PM
Overwhelmed with beauty when reading your honouring feedback Sunlite.. deeply grateful.. warmest wishes..
Date: 12/21/2018 8:58:00 AM
Stunning piece Besma! Elegant and deep, magnificent poetry. Congratulations on POTD, xomo!
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:13:00 PM
Elegant are your very words! Warm is your heart.. elating is your feedback dear Maureen.. thank you so much. Stay blessed always.
Date: 12/21/2018 7:39:00 AM
Besma, congratulations on having your poem selected as POTD, enjoy the honor ~
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:10:00 PM
Dear Heart, I'm also enjoying the honour of your gracious visit and heartfelt feedback.. my great delight.. thank you so much.. Warmest wishes.
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