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She Waited

Caring and loving for him she waited He wondered why they never dated Hit me with an Epi-Pen Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy Date:11/30/2019

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/17/2019 9:17:00 PM

Lovely form....good luck in the contest!!!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/18/2019 7:34:00 AM

Lol thank you G but I didn't even place in this one!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 5:48:00 AM

This is terrific Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/5/2019 7:07:00 AM

Lol thank you so much Caren!:)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/3/2019 10:21:00 AM

Brenda, Your lady-in-waiting Epigram..,so nice a reminder of two hearts, like ships, that passed in the night. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Richard so much for your kind comments!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2019 7:41:00 PM

Ooh, Brenda! You've nailed something that I'll bet resonates with almost everyone. It sure does with me. Perfect! :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:55:00 AM

See there is my big smile today! All from your lovely comment! Thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/1/2019 12:21:00 PM

reminds me of the close bond between best friends of the opposite sex, holding crushes but never acting on them... good write! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:53:00 AM

Your so right sandy those kind of crushed can ruin a friendship trust me I know and regret it so because I do miss that friend dearly! Was my best friend and I've only had two in my life!;( thank you!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/1/2019 6:04:00 AM

Breaking the ice, often is the hardest thing to do. This keen, insightful poem makes this so painfully known, Bre. Love is waiting, but neither has the courage to, as Tom said, make the first move. A very wise in matters of the heart poem. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend that's so sonof you!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/1/2019 5:11:00 AM

Both afraid to make the first move. Good luck Brenda. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thx so much Tom!;)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/1/2019 4:07:00 AM

Beautifully put dearest, Brenda! Good luck my dear!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/3/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for the visit! Appreciate your lovely comment!;)