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She Waited

Caring and loving for him she waited
He wondered why they never dated


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Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy 
Date:11/30/2019

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Pace Ink-U-Script

December 17, 2019 at 9:17 PM

Lovely form....good luck in the contest!!!!

Brenda Chiri

December 18, 2019 at 7:34 AM

Lol thank you G but I didn't even place in this one!;)

Caren Krutsinger

December 5, 2019 at 5:48 AM

This is terrific Brenda!

Brenda Chiri

December 5, 2019 at 7:07 AM

Lol thank you so much Caren!:)

Quoth Theraven

December 3, 2019 at 10:21 AM

Brenda, Your lady-in-waiting Epigram..,so nice a reminder of two hearts, like ships, that passed in the night. -Richard

Brenda Chiri

December 3, 2019 at 10:24 AM

Thank you Richard so much for your kind comments!;)

Gershon Wolf

December 2, 2019 at 7:41 PM

Ooh, Brenda! You've nailed something that I'll bet resonates with almost everyone. It sure does with me. Perfect! :) gw

Brenda Chiri

December 3, 2019 at 7:55 AM

See there is my big smile today! All from your lovely comment! Thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams

December 1, 2019 at 12:21 PM

reminds me of the close bond between best friends of the opposite sex, holding crushes but never acting on them... good write! :)

Brenda Chiri

December 3, 2019 at 7:53 AM

Your so right sandy those kind of crushed can ruin a friendship trust me I know and regret it so because I do miss that friend dearly! Was my best friend and I've only had two in my life!;( thank you!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 1, 2019 at 6:04 AM

Breaking the ice, often is the hardest thing to do. This keen, insightful poem makes this so painfully known, Bre. Love is waiting, but neither has the courage to, as Tom said, make the first move. A very wise in matters of the heart poem. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri

December 3, 2019 at 7:50 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend that's so sonof you!;)