She Treads the Trodden Path

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Her arms laden with small garden tools and sweet scented flowers
She wanders into the graveyard, and treads the trodden path
Noticing the subtle differences given with the different hours
The gentle swaying of cobwebs after they are so cleverly cast
The black birds hunting for their so hungry meal the earth scours
Afternoon flowers bowing under the suns hot burning wrath
Only to perk up once again after the so refreshing rain showers

She treads the trodden path
 
The tall trees over lapping, seem to hold her with their embrace
To her, whispering sweet nothings into her forever listening ears
It is as if with their sweeping branches her emotions they encase
Further down the trodden path she walks, her eyes welled with tears
Embodying her with a feeling of overwhelming compassion and grace  
For often they have watched her come to this graveyard over the years
To tend her loved ones grave, and upon it, flowers she would place

She treads the trodden path

Has it not been 10 long years, or more, soon to join him, she is sure
This grave she has kept nurtured with all her love and all her plight
Death to her emptiness and loneliness will soon to be her only cure
Then together again, they will be reunited as their only given right
A grave then to be attended by their children they went on to spoor
Where they will then tread the trodden path at different times of light
Noticing the subtle differences of this graveyard, so beautiful and pure

They tread the trodden path

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/8/2017 11:59:00 PM
Great poem Indiana, the imagery created in this is fantastic. I really enjoyed the read. Regards, Craig
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/9/2017 5:56:00 AM
Ello Craig, very nice of you to pass by again, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem . . .
Date: 8/5/2017 3:03:00 PM
Indiana, you do have a refreshing way of articulating how you feel and I love it... Nicely done.. ~*
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Date: 8/5/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you "Eve" for your very welcome comments - I am glad you enjoyed my latest poem and hope to pop in soon to read more of your beautiful expressed writes also - Kind regards - Indiana x x x
Date: 8/5/2017 4:02:00 AM
A beautiful narrative and so true according to nature no path is untrodden though we believe otherwise. In some life we have taken them. Well penned. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/5/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you "Sunita" as a lady that is "One" with the "Earth - Sky and Beyond" I find your words very complimentary and I am very "Blessed" to have received them - Indiana x x x
Date: 8/4/2017 4:39:00 PM
Hello Indiana, This is a lovely piece here for sure. The three progressive narratives artfully build on one another. And the imagery you've employed teases the reader to read-on further. You could safely classify this one, if you want to, as a "Narrative" poem. I've seen this repeating technique used in other types of poems too. You'll find that Poetry Soup's list of poetry classifications are not exhaustive. It's good to have some quality poetry guides on hand. I can recommend some. Best, Gary
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/4/2017 7:27:00 PM
"Narrative" now I am getting it - Well "Gary" what to you can I say - Other than you have really made my day - Learned a bit more to come I am sure - Writing is like a cheese - to have quality it has to mature - he he he - "God Bless You" I am really enjoying this journey with you - Time to read some more of your fine works I think - Regards - Indiana x x x
Date: 8/4/2017 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful, just how her Love is so strong for her past husband that she embraces and even looks forward to her own death to be reunited with her lost Love.. Thank you it brightened my day :)
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:59:00 PM
Of course it brightened my day , she is a lucky woman to have felt such a strong Love.. Some search their whole lives just to come up empty But she Felt true Love..
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/4/2017 7:36:00 PM
Glad you liked it "Glen" and that it some how "Brightened" your day - Never quite expected that - Some lovely writes yourself there "Gary" - The one to your friend "Ray" was very heartfelt and so utterly true I was in tears - In a situation like that, there is sometimes no words to find - But you found them "Glen" and it broke my heart to read them - "God Bless You" - Indiana x x x
Date: 8/3/2017 3:02:00 PM
Indiana, this is remarkable! It has an almost palpable imagery that colors death with a welcome veil. I loved it! : )
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Date: 8/3/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thank you "Connie" - I decided to step away from "Couplets" for a while to see what I could come up with - So glad in whatever style it is that it can still reach the reader in some way - kind regards - Indiana x x x
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