James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Rhyme

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She Told Me Goodbye-

My passion is grief desperation
Heart ache I reel 
Heartbreak I feel 
Engaged in in thoughts romancing 
Broken up heart collapsing 
She told me goodbye 
I'm not her guy 
I began to cry 
Why 
I was blended,  intended all amended 
I thought
 I've beaten my beating heart she thrown out
 I crave torrid thoughts 
She told me goodbye 
fantastic faults thoughts of love you treated me like a dog tied me up outside repeat again I'm not ,
your man
Not even a friend
 I was offended 
This intended unattended 
I was hurt embedded and bewildered
Why, oh why
Did she tell me goodbye


9/23/74
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr  1974 ©, 2021©

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2021 at 1:03 PM Hello James, I can only say she did not know what she wanted. So she said good bye. Finding true love takes time to be found. blessings Darlene.